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Array ( [sid] => 41817 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pendekar Melayu Turun Ke Gelanggang [time] => 2004-04-05 00:07:48 [hometext] => This is actually a Malay poetry or Bahasa Melayu poetry, written in my native tounge. A nostalgia it seem I haven't writen in Malay for a long long time... will put up translation later..got to go! [bodytext] => Pendekar Melayu,
turun ke gelanggang.
Pendua terselak,
keris panjang di tangan.

Meliuk tari,
mencorak pencak.
Bunga diatur,
kekuda dipasak.

Mendaulat negeri,
raja dijulang.
Musuh yang hadir,
digempur ditentang.

Biar berlumur,
dipercik darah.
Angkara mungkar,
akan disanggah.

Maruah bangsa,
keramat negara.
Ke hujung nyawa,
keringat membara.

Pendekar Melayu,
turun ke gelanggang.
berpatah arah,
ajal berpantang.

P.S. hmmm not as nice as I can make it...I must be forgetting my mother tongue...need to read up studying my own language. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 43 [informant] => baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Pendekar Melayu Turun Ke Gelanggang

Contributed by baronhawk on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:07:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Pendekar Melayu,
turun ke gelanggang.
Pendua terselak,
keris panjang di tangan.

Meliuk tari,
mencorak pencak.
Bunga diatur,
kekuda dipasak.

Mendaulat negeri,
raja dijulang.
Musuh yang hadir,
digempur ditentang.

Biar berlumur,
dipercik darah.
Angkara mungkar,
akan disanggah.

Maruah bangsa,
keramat negara.
Ke hujung nyawa,
keringat membara.

Pendekar Melayu,
turun ke gelanggang.
berpatah arah,
ajal berpantang.

P.S. hmmm not as nice as I can make it...I must be forgetting my mother tongue...need to read up studying my own language.

Copyright © baronhawk ... [ 2004-04-05 00:07:48]
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Re: Pendekar Melayu Turun Ke Gelanggang (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:28:25 AM AEST
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Thanks baronhawk, i am really looking forward to your english version! malay and thai and singapore and all thoxse place intruige me. :)

tt

Re: Pendekar Melayu Turun Ke Gelanggang (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:41:04 AM AEST
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im sorry i dont know what this actually means but it definatly intrests me... i am envious of ur bilingual skills :)

Re: Pendekar Melayu Turun Ke Gelanggang (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:56:13 AM AEST
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Nice! I think if it were expanded a bit more and delved a little more into the warrior's thoughts then it would be even better. Don't worry, I need to read up on Malay as well, haven't really read Malay poetry since I left school.

Re: Pendekar Melayu Turun Ke Gelanggang (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 02:41:47 AM AEST
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I was hanging on to every word! i think i'll wait till the English version! see ya soon.

wildejohnny.

Re: Pendekar Melayu Turun Ke Gelanggang (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:56:23 AM AEST
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what is the pronounciation?

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