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Array ( [sid] => 41811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He Comes [time] => 2004-04-04 23:28:32 [hometext] => not that flash but something i like [bodytext] => the lord arrives
all darkness and cold
astride his
mighty steed
the blackness surrounds him
envelopes
and breathes
so cold and
consuming
red eyes ablaze
torture's afoot
shredding and ripping
bleeding
blood everywere
yet never a drop
touches his cloak
nor his armour
not even his steed
he's come to consume
your last spirits vestige
of goodness and light
he cannot take
mine
theres nothing left
so deep inside
take it you wraith
consume and feed
have your fill
hungry with me
you will go
looking deep inside
i have no soul
nothing is there
just your darkness and cold
the feelings have left
all taken away
not by you
but but others
take your fill
foul beast
i despise you
yet love you
we are one and the same
nothing inside
born to destroy
never to heal
thats who you are
thats who i am
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 13 [informant] => mingnon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
He Comes

Contributed by mingnon on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



the lord arrives
all darkness and cold
astride his
mighty steed
the blackness surrounds him
envelopes
and breathes
so cold and
consuming
red eyes ablaze
torture's afoot
shredding and ripping
bleeding
blood everywere
yet never a drop
touches his cloak
nor his armour
not even his steed
he's come to consume
your last spirits vestige
of goodness and light
he cannot take
mine
theres nothing left
so deep inside
take it you wraith
consume and feed
have your fill
hungry with me
you will go
looking deep inside
i have no soul
nothing is there
just your darkness and cold
the feelings have left
all taken away
not by you
but but others
take your fill
foul beast
i despise you
yet love you
we are one and the same
nothing inside
born to destroy
never to heal
thats who you are
thats who i am




Copyright © mingnon ... [ 2004-04-04 23:28:32]
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Re: He Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:53:49 AM AEST
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In an odd little way, I can relate to this. Great write, the imagery is awesome!

~ Moonlit


Re: He Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 02:50:15 AM AEST
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Very vivid, lots of imagry. It's great. Welcome to YPDC.
~JadedExistence~


Re: He Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:27:02 AM AEST
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Dark and descriptive!
Beautiful.
Hur




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