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Array ( [sid] => 41769 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Illusion [time] => 2004-04-04 17:29:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => my blood boils
tears spill from my eyes
as I reach
a conclusion,
our friendship
was all an illusion,
it never exsisted

your crowd,
the people
you call friends,
have drastically
changed you

I turned my back,
for one moment
and you backstab me

its not what
you said
its the fact
that you lied,
lied
to my face

I cant believe it

you used to be
the sweetest girl
but now,
now
you're one of
them

I thought I knew you
but I guess
I was wrong

very wrong [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 6 [informant] => monkey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Illusion

Contributed by monkey on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

my blood boils
tears spill from my eyes
as I reach
a conclusion,
our friendship
was all an illusion,
it never exsisted

your crowd,
the people
you call friends,
have drastically
changed you

I turned my back,
for one moment
and you backstab me

its not what
you said
its the fact
that you lied,
lied
to my face

I cant believe it

you used to be
the sweetest girl
but now,
now
you're one of
them

I thought I knew you
but I guess
I was wrong

very wrong

Copyright © monkey ... [ 2004-04-04 17:29:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by jamsters on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 07:13:42 PM AEST
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lemme guess...this is about rachel...did u get all your violence from me or just some of it
i like the boiling blood part...its violent:D
but remember kids...violence is not the answer...its the conclusion (hehe)
if u have to many violent thoughts (like me) seek help
violent music brainwashes u (which is kinda fun) so go and buy all the insane clown posse cd's(they kick ass) i had a dream bout them last night...i was at there concert and simple plan kept playin...it ***** me off...but the sprayed the audience wit fago! and i met a guy in a trench coat (hott guy) and he was like u dont have a boyfriend? lets make out and it was kewl!

love jamie jo

Re: Illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:11:38 AM AEST
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I like this!! I totally relate to it. It's a shame when those few special people we still have left just go and turn into one of "them", as you said. Thinking you knew everything about someone only to find out you didn't know them at all... that's something I'm all too familiar with. Wonderful write!

~ Moonlit

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