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nothing
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:52:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i'm feeling nothing...
emptiness reigns my heart,
scrolling through the abyss of my thoughts,
disjointed images pulling me apart,
no pain, no love, no hurt,
nothing....
i am empty...
i am outside,
my body floating before my eyes...
feeling nothing.
distance..as i fly from my pain..
where have i gone? for this skin is just a shell...
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Re: nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by JadedExistence on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:06:46 AM AEST (User
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Oh, this is so sad. I can really relate to being in this place, where you feel absolutely nothing. Great write.
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Re: nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by spider on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:13:02 AM AEST (User
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its wierd how sometimes you dont feel real. explains exactly how i feel in PE. touching write. |
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Re: nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:38:55 AM AEST (User
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omg i can totally relate to the 'nothingness' you've described so well..
this is excellent..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:07:08 AM AEST (User
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It sounds like a feeling resembling shock. Seeing your surroundings but not feeling like you are there. Lots of pain in this poem. Touched my heart. Kie |
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Re: nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by silent on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:27:00 PM AEST (User
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I found this one a little upsetting for i relate alot like this, to me it was a brilliant description of what it is like, excellent.
Silent |
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Re: nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:53:14 PM AEST (User
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I feel the emotion of the poem, and relate to the numbed shock and agony expressed by the writer. The writer has my deepest empathy...one should never have to experience such pain, but somehow, at one point or another, we all seem too experience it.
This is a very well written poem. |
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Re: nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:23:03 AM AEST (User
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I feel like this a lot and sometimes I like it. You've captured the feeling very well here. |
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