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A precious life has gone, taken from this place
There will be no more tomorrows, all thats left is empty tears, of the family that was close to them that they held so very dear
We dont know why this happend, nor can we question why
All's I ask is that you pray for them to help their days go by.
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Lost so Young

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:11:56 AM in AEST
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A precious smile lost, fallen from their face
A precious life has gone, taken from this place
There will be no more tomorrows, all thats left is empty tears, of the family that was close to them that they held so very dear
We dont know why this happend, nor can we question why
All's I ask is that you pray for them to help their days go by.




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Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 07:17:20 AM AEST
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In Jesus name. Amen.
I'm sure they will be lifted up.
Thank u so much for sharing this heart wrenching scene....The Lord will bless u too for the luv u show in their pain.
luv, huggs,prayers,
emy


Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:05:03 PM AEST
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What a great heart you have to have written this. I pray they rest in peaceful slumber. Such a tragic thing to have happened. Thank you for sharing this with us. Kie


Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:46:43 AM AEST
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Very sad but such is life unfortunately. Nicely expressed.

Silent


Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:38:06 PM AEST
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This Is So Terrible, Very Sad Thing ...You Must Have A Loving And Caring Hugh Heart To Have Wrote This To Let Us Know...
Thank You So Much,,,,I'll Pray For The Family.
God Bless...
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 06:22:57 PM AEST
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so so sad. you expressed it so well. greatly done.
Arden


Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:36:01 PM AEST
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LITTLE TO SAY FROM SUCH A BIG HEART!
YOU'RE SO NICE TO CARE LIKE THIS!!
LOL-DAN!!!


Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:48:16 PM AEST
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this is such a caring thought...

wildej.


Re: Lost so Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:37:40 PM AEST
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I Am Sorry What Happen To The Mother And Daughter. I Hate When Someone Doesn't Do Nothing And There Life Was Taken Away




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