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Tonight wrapped up in a sea of depression
I found you, trying to release myself of these drowning thoughts
Killing me slowly, softly, tenderly
A thousand tears I cried
Unheard, unseen, unknown
A chapter of my life is now closed, and with it I die a little more
Wrapped up in a sea of leaches, I sit and count the days
Until the marks of sadness are forever washed away….
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A Thousand Tears

Contributed by silent on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 03:58:16 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Tonight wrapped up in a sea of depression
I found you, trying to release myself of these drowning thoughts
Killing me slowly, softly, tenderly
A thousand tears I cried
Unheard, unseen, unknown
A chapter of my life is now closed, and with it I die a little more
Wrapped up in a sea of leaches, I sit and count the days
Until the marks of sadness are forever washed away….

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Re: A Thousand Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:08:41 AM AEST
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Wrapped up in a sea of leeches, now that's quotable! it's good to get your feelings on paper makes for good poetry.

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Re: A Thousand Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:39:26 AM AEST
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wow, scary poem. I like the gothic undertones in some places in some places, and the metaphors and similies in this poem are so well done, I could never think of any as good as these ones. Try to find help for depression, eventually it consumes you, and you get more depressed because you forget what you were depressed about to start of with.

Re: A Thousand Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 07:16:41 AM AEST
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There's always time to grieve when we have to change stages in our lives... just remember that when one chapter ends, another begins... and if its at the end of the book, just pick up another and start from the beginning!!! :) I wish you the best of luck in your time of grief, and I hope that you'll make it through ok. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write with us...

Ginsdance

Re: A Thousand Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:33:43 AM AEST
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Dark, very dark but still very intriguing and beautiful in a tragic way. I don't deal well with changes either but yeah, what're you gonna do? Great write anyway.

Re: A Thousand Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:06:57 PM AEST
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You expressed your inner thoughts well in this poem. May you find inner happiness, you deserve it. Kie

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