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do we fight
to say we do
all the things right
yet we fight
to kill mankind
in blow after blow
we kill mankind
for just this nation
but yet thy forgot
that ye ourselves
are nothing but a world
yet we say
one nation under god
be of such few
but ye forget
that this lord
sees all and
chose all
not one nation
but of world
of men united
but yet we fail
to see that
in which ye should seek
so we fight
and kill our should be friends
our should be fellows
we shall unite
as one world
under gods eyes
or we shall all die [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => marsh62287 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

world as should be

Contributed by marsh62287 on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 03:01:35 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

what kind of fight
do we fight
to say we do
all the things right
yet we fight
to kill mankind
in blow after blow
we kill mankind
for just this nation
but yet thy forgot
that ye ourselves
are nothing but a world
yet we say
one nation under god
be of such few
but ye forget
that this lord
sees all and
chose all
not one nation
but of world
of men united
but yet we fail
to see that
in which ye should seek
so we fight
and kill our should be friends
our should be fellows
we shall unite
as one world
under gods eyes
or we shall all die

Copyright © marsh62287 ... [ 2004-04-04 03:01:35]
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Re: world as should be (User Rating: 1 )
by ammalu on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:41:12 AM AEST
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lengthy and not so clear - attempted theme is good - keep writing.

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