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Array ( [sid] => 41656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your life [time] => 2004-04-03 20:46:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your life is such a hell,
It's hard to believe you haven't fell,
And done the irreversable act.
I'm so glad you never mad the suicide pact,
But I wish you were better off.
Now you may scoff,
When I say that you are,
As beautiful and bright as a star,
But I believe it and think that you,
should realize it too.
You insist you're bad,
But only because of the things said when mad.
See it or not you really are a good person,
Being near you can heighten,
Anyones day.
I know that you shall say,
That you are no such thing,
and this is some fantasy I'm creating.
It's not though,
And you know,
I wish you would beleive me,
And for yourself see,
That all the mean things said,
Are not to be paid,
Any attention at all.
They will cause you to fall,
Into a deep state of depression.
You should fashion,
A wall to ignore it,
And learn the truth as I know it. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Xion_alXar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Your life

Contributed by Xion_alXar on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:46:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Your life is such a hell,
It's hard to believe you haven't fell,
And done the irreversable act.
I'm so glad you never mad the suicide pact,
But I wish you were better off.
Now you may scoff,
When I say that you are,
As beautiful and bright as a star,
But I believe it and think that you,
should realize it too.
You insist you're bad,
But only because of the things said when mad.
See it or not you really are a good person,
Being near you can heighten,
Anyones day.
I know that you shall say,
That you are no such thing,
and this is some fantasy I'm creating.
It's not though,
And you know,
I wish you would beleive me,
And for yourself see,
That all the mean things said,
Are not to be paid,
Any attention at all.
They will cause you to fall,
Into a deep state of depression.
You should fashion,
A wall to ignore it,
And learn the truth as I know it.

Copyright © Xion_alXar ... [ 2004-04-03 20:46:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your life (User Rating: 1 )
by lonelywolf04 on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:12:53 AM AEST
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u do some deep stuff man

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