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Do i really want to stay anymore
Sick of acting, no more can i store
How i feel inside, cannot fully hide
Withdraw yes, i can very well
But as i do people can tell
I contemplate the end
But the message they send
Is the same as i feel
They cannot help me
I wonder what my limits really are
I guess we will find out
Reaching out to you for help
But you cannot give what i need, only grieve
So i will continue to live inside of my mask
For how much longer i cannot tell
My limits soon i know i will reach
Down that well of sadness i crave so much......
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Contemplating Death

Contributed by silent on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:09:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide





Do i really want to stay anymore
Sick of acting, no more can i store
How i feel inside, cannot fully hide
Withdraw yes, i can very well
But as i do people can tell
I contemplate the end
But the message they send
Is the same as i feel
They cannot help me
I wonder what my limits really are
I guess we will find out
Reaching out to you for help
But you cannot give what i need, only grieve
So i will continue to live inside of my mask
For how much longer i cannot tell
My limits soon i know i will reach
Down that well of sadness i crave so much......




Copyright © silent ... [ 2004-04-03 20:09:04]
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Re: Contemplating Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:11:20 PM AEST
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What a heartfelt and sad poem. So hard to try to be someone we are not.
Stitch


Re: Contemplating Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:13:31 PM AEST
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Thats a wonderful poem!!! It also sends a message out to the people who read it. I could feel the strong emotion radiating off of the words posted. Dont comit suicide though because death is not the answer, you make it harder for the ones who love you.

kisses,
~Soulless~


Re: Contemplating Death (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:55:44 PM AEST
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wow silence and yet again you humble me... your writing is exsquisite. :) such a way with words.

Lindsey


Re: Contemplating Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:14:06 AM AEST
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good message here, dont do it!

wildejohnny.


Re: Contemplating Death (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:29:36 AM AEST
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then who would mirror the way I feel, to make me think, I'm not alone. softly look for a simple sign, a prayer said long ago, foot prints in the sand........read that prayer, then answer me.........you are not alone.

I read your words whenever you write, I need them. thank you


Re: Contemplating Death (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:44:36 AM AEST
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this is such a well written poem ; I can totally relate to it, as I think many others can too.. you have such a great talent, keep it up!


Re: Contemplating Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Crash on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:51:33 AM AEST
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This poem is well put to gether, i can relate to the emotions. great job




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