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Array ( [sid] => 41642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When? [time] => 2004-04-03 18:47:57 [hometext] => Stupid questions that i cant help but ask [bodytext] => who is there to help,
when theres no one there to save?
and
what is the point,
when we realise that there isnt one?
and
where do you all go,
when all i need is a friend?
and
how can i feel so empty,
when at times i can feel so much?
and
why do i sit here crying,
when i stare at an empty page?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ZooYork_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

When?

Contributed by ZooYork_Chick on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

who is there to help,
when theres no one there to save?
and
what is the point,
when we realise that there isnt one?
and
where do you all go,
when all i need is a friend?
and
how can i feel so empty,
when at times i can feel so much?
and
why do i sit here crying,
when i stare at an empty page?

Copyright © ZooYork_Chick ... [ 2004-04-03 18:47:57]
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Re: When? (User Rating: 1 )
by GeorgeJamesDelgado on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:18:20 PM AEST
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He is there for you. He saved me from certain death in 1992. Physically I was pulled out from two forklifts that were crushing me!
Don't despair, He is always there for you. Just listen, as you will hear Him. Not in a voice, but in feeling. Your fine poem echos the need to be close to Him.

Re: When? (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:19:48 PM AEST
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When...when... when indeed. Evocative and questioning...nice pick of topic I wonder what you seek in times such as these? I guess the answer is write...write and write... if all you can ask is when.. then show us the suspense... ha ha ha I was trained educationally to believe that no question is stupid... for truth every word is valid to seek.. not stupid perhaps but pondering...ponder on and share with us the writes...an okay write I guess!

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