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Array ( [sid] => 41562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel From Heaven Part 1 [time] => 2004-04-03 02:12:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => An angel from heaven was sent here to earth some time ago.
This angel had more love than i have ever known
And a heart that was made of gold.
She came to me one night when i was feeling down
And she put a smile back into my frown.
She was an angel full of so many dreams
And God knew that they all
Needed to be seen.
She went through life here in her new world
Not being able to understand why certain things happened.
So I took that angel by the hand,
And promised to help her understand.
Now she had no idea what to expect
on this beautiful moonlit night that we met.
But I promised to take things slow,
So she had time to learn all, that needed to be known.
She taught me things, that i have never known
And i showed her things , that were meant to be shown.
We spoke of God, and the rest of her angel friends
As we walked the beach, looking for things that were odd.
I called her my angel, and thanked her for being who she was.
And at the same time she thanked me,
For showing her that she could still have fun.
I stared at my angel face to face,
And told her, that no one could ever take her place.
For she had eyes that would shine like diamonds.
And hair with beautiful shades of golden.
A heart so big, and a body that was really slick.
Now my angel was starting to blush,
And said please boy there is no need to rush.
For there is a lot yet to be seen, and a lot to be learned,
Before this heart can be earned.
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Angel From Heaven Part 1

Contributed by Rylo on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:12:59 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

An angel from heaven was sent here to earth some time ago.
This angel had more love than i have ever known
And a heart that was made of gold.
She came to me one night when i was feeling down
And she put a smile back into my frown.
She was an angel full of so many dreams
And God knew that they all
Needed to be seen.
She went through life here in her new world
Not being able to understand why certain things happened.
So I took that angel by the hand,
And promised to help her understand.
Now she had no idea what to expect
on this beautiful moonlit night that we met.
But I promised to take things slow,
So she had time to learn all, that needed to be known.
She taught me things, that i have never known
And i showed her things , that were meant to be shown.
We spoke of God, and the rest of her angel friends
As we walked the beach, looking for things that were odd.
I called her my angel, and thanked her for being who she was.
And at the same time she thanked me,
For showing her that she could still have fun.
I stared at my angel face to face,
And told her, that no one could ever take her place.
For she had eyes that would shine like diamonds.
And hair with beautiful shades of golden.
A heart so big, and a body that was really slick.
Now my angel was starting to blush,
And said please boy there is no need to rush.
For there is a lot yet to be seen, and a lot to be learned,
Before this heart can be earned.

Copyright © Rylo ... [ 2004-04-03 02:12:59]
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Re: Angel From Heaven Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Luxx on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:20:40 AM AEST
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i liiike it...makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside..

Re: Angel From Heaven Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:36:25 AM AEST
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OmG WoW I Love It :-)
Makes Me Feel All Tingly And Warm Inside...
This Has Touched My Heart Deeply...
Very Beautiful Write :-)
Hugs
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: Angel From Heaven Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:49:25 PM AEST
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LOL, now see what you have done. All the young ladies (probably some older ones too) are all swooning! Nice piece of work.

Rita

Re: Angel From Heaven Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:55:58 PM AEST
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Rylo, this was such a magnificent write. I enjoyed reading it. I'm off to read the second part as of now. Very touching write. *S* Cynthia

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