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Array ( [sid] => 41546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not Here Not There [time] => 2004-04-02 23:26:51 [hometext] => This is the complementary poem to "Flower I Am". It uses every word in the poem Flower I Am to portray a completely different message. A story of Protection and desire. [bodytext] => Ma and Pa walk wisely on worship,
a child, not baby, loved his dream,
blue, gold moon-man with sun beam,
I AM BIG,
She, like my beauty , a smile, angel-eye
gaze,
Frantic, dad mom ask son to run the
machine,
Our gorgeous girl faces him and he give
Sweet music,
Oh look see this god-goddess guy-woman sister-brother cat-dog red-green,
If the grander snowy ocean by her hair
flowered,
For my daughter, being so full of whiter
storming whatness,
No! We go here languid friends,
It is you.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 64 [informant] => carpets [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Not Here Not There

Contributed by carpets on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:26:51 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Ma and Pa walk wisely on worship,
a child, not baby, loved his dream,
blue, gold moon-man with sun beam,
I AM BIG,
She, like my beauty , a smile, angel-eye
gaze,
Frantic, dad mom ask son to run the
machine,
Our gorgeous girl faces him and he give
Sweet music,
Oh look see this god-goddess guy-woman sister-brother cat-dog red-green,
If the grander snowy ocean by her hair
flowered,
For my daughter, being so full of whiter
storming whatness,
No! We go here languid friends,
It is you.

Copyright © carpets ... [ 2004-04-02 23:26:51]
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Re: Not Here Not There (User Rating: 1 )
by AllThatJazz on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:41:11 PM AEST
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I love both of your poems it is so interesting that you can make two meaningful poems out of one set of words. This poem is really special. It has so much symbolism that when trying to understand this poem, it is almost like trying to piece together a puzzle. Some of the best ambiguous poetry I have ever seen!

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