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Array ( [sid] => 41526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drift Away [time] => 2004-04-02 21:18:22 [hometext] => I wrote this one in the bathroom of my grandparents house, I was desperate to write a poem... [bodytext] => Down drip the specks of my sanity
Ebbing away into the nothingness Ive become
Swift are the silent strokes of midnight
Moonlight spills over reflections of who Ive become
All drifts away from me

I feel you
Boring deep within my mind
ONe day I will come and find you
Keep you so you cannot hide
Somehow I know it will slip away
I will always drift away

Sweet dreams levitate my gravity
This bitter screaming pulls me under
Im falling apart without you near me
I cant live like this forever

I feel you
Boring deep within my mind
ONe day I will come and find you
Keep you so you cannot hide
Somehow I know it will slip away
I will always drift away

I cant see you yet I know your still there
Hiding in crevaces I will never find
Melting beneath thoughts I cant bear
How I long to reach you before Im pulled below
And never burn from fighting fear

I feel you
Boring deep within my mind
ONe day I will come and find you
Keep you so you cannot hide
Somehow I know it will slip away
I will always drift away

Its time to end this game youve made
As all around me starts to fade
You rise up from where you lay
I catch a glimpse before I drift away
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Drift Away

Contributed by Soulless on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:18:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Down drip the specks of my sanity
Ebbing away into the nothingness Ive become
Swift are the silent strokes of midnight
Moonlight spills over reflections of who Ive become
All drifts away from me

I feel you
Boring deep within my mind
ONe day I will come and find you
Keep you so you cannot hide
Somehow I know it will slip away
I will always drift away

Sweet dreams levitate my gravity
This bitter screaming pulls me under
Im falling apart without you near me
I cant live like this forever

I feel you
Boring deep within my mind
ONe day I will come and find you
Keep you so you cannot hide
Somehow I know it will slip away
I will always drift away

I cant see you yet I know your still there
Hiding in crevaces I will never find
Melting beneath thoughts I cant bear
How I long to reach you before Im pulled below
And never burn from fighting fear

I feel you
Boring deep within my mind
ONe day I will come and find you
Keep you so you cannot hide
Somehow I know it will slip away
I will always drift away

Its time to end this game youve made
As all around me starts to fade
You rise up from where you lay
I catch a glimpse before I drift away




Copyright © Soulless ... [ 2004-04-02 21:18:22]
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Re: Drift Away (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:51:56 PM AEST
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another masterpiece! I liked the first stanza the best... keep on posting you definitely have a talent for writing.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Drift Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:35:38 PM AEST
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Yes, I most certainly DID think yours was good . . . as you just proved again as I read this. Wow, now I'm all jealous *pouts*

--Nora


Re: Drift Away (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:23:34 AM AEST
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i love the first stanza. soulless you have a real talent. all your poems make me stop and think about them for ages and i have to read them at least twice.

hugs and love
XgenX


Re: Drift Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:15:09 AM AEST
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exquisite poem, so many lines were so breathtakingly beautiful, a true pleasure to read you, hugs n' love, nessa

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Re: Drift Away (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:02:33 PM AEST
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What can i say that han't been said already?
Your flows are rivers of images that drift through the mind.




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