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Array ( [sid] => 41518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Promise You'll Still love me [time] => 2004-04-02 20:38:44 [hometext] => This one has also been published and I won an editors choice award for it [bodytext] => Promise you'll still love me
when I'm old and gray
Promise you'll still love me
when my good looks melt away
Promise that you'll love me when
I begin to wrinkle and to shrink
and that you'll still love me
when our house has that mothball stink
When my hair begins to thin
and arthritis begins to set in
Promise me that on bad days
when my memory starts to decay
Promise that you'll love me
Promise me when I get weak and I take a final breath
You'll be there to love me
If you can promise this
Then I'll know it's true
You love me, as I do you
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Alisteal_Rayne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Promise You'll Still love me

Contributed by Alisteal_Rayne on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:38:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Promise you'll still love me
when I'm old and gray
Promise you'll still love me
when my good looks melt away
Promise that you'll love me when
I begin to wrinkle and to shrink
and that you'll still love me
when our house has that mothball stink
When my hair begins to thin
and arthritis begins to set in
Promise me that on bad days
when my memory starts to decay
Promise that you'll love me
Promise me when I get weak and I take a final breath
You'll be there to love me
If you can promise this
Then I'll know it's true
You love me, as I do you

Copyright © Alisteal_Rayne ... [ 2004-04-02 20:38:44]
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Re: Promise You'll Still love me (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:42:27 PM AEST
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This is such a good poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it definetely deserved the editors choice OVIOUSLY! lol*~ Good write! WeLL done!:)
*XXoXXoXXo*

Re: Promise You'll Still love me (User Rating: 1 )
by angrycheerios on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:42:27 PM AEST
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the moth balls line made me giggle

Re: Promise You'll Still love me (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:32:30 PM AEST
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this is really good and so very sweet.....good job!
luv always

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