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Array ( [sid] => 41450 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Soul [time] => 2004-04-02 11:39:05 [hometext] => this was when i was really depressed [bodytext] => Soul.

I feel as if my soul has been torn out of me,from underneath my own nose,
Life has no meaning anymore,
The trees that were once so beautiful,
Are now just another piece of wood,
Life now is one big motorway,
Trying to get to another end,
But i want to get there sooner,
There is nothing left for me back there,
Hopes and dreams wasted,

At night i sleep,
No dreams fill my head,
Because there is no soul to help me dream,
I fall into dreamless sleep,
And i hope i die in my sleep,
It is the one hope i have...

But i wake the next day,
I feel entirely useless,
How can so much pain come just because i have no soul?

I know the pain and i will never forget it,
The stich in your heart each time you breathe,
The dout in your stomach,
The darkness lurching in the shadows,

And i hope one day that will go,
But that day is some time off,
because the darkness is still lurking me and won't stop... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Soul

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:39:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Soul.

I feel as if my soul has been torn out of me,from underneath my own nose,
Life has no meaning anymore,
The trees that were once so beautiful,
Are now just another piece of wood,
Life now is one big motorway,
Trying to get to another end,
But i want to get there sooner,
There is nothing left for me back there,
Hopes and dreams wasted,

At night i sleep,
No dreams fill my head,
Because there is no soul to help me dream,
I fall into dreamless sleep,
And i hope i die in my sleep,
It is the one hope i have...

But i wake the next day,
I feel entirely useless,
How can so much pain come just because i have no soul?

I know the pain and i will never forget it,
The stich in your heart each time you breathe,
The dout in your stomach,
The darkness lurching in the shadows,

And i hope one day that will go,
But that day is some time off,
because the darkness is still lurking me and won't stop...

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-04-02 11:39:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:07:36 PM AEST
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im feeling alot like this at the moment. stay strong. you'll get through it! *hugs* phil xxx ^_~

Re: Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by TeeJay on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 07:56:03 PM AEST
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Many of us go through a period such as those you've expressed so wonderfully. Hang in there, things will get better if you believe in yourself ... Take Care

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