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Array ( [sid] => 41435 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Grimme a break [time] => 2004-04-02 08:39:43 [hometext] => I know it when someone's lying thru the teeth. [bodytext] => You say you don't like pretty gals,
You say you overlook appearance,
You say there's nuthin much to be enthralled,
For you see, you think you are more than a
Male.

Yet, you think of her, you muse over her,
You complain when you can't get to her
Why won't she answer? Why won't she reply?
And you are still lying through your teeth,
Saying "when did i say i like her?"

She has large, shining eyes,
Fair, flawless skin, one sweet smile,
A great figure, two nice dimples,
Is she not the perfect female,
That your species try so hard to get?

Now, I know why this eventual must come,
The covers must drop, this act must end,
I see through you, with this intuition,
I see it all, and I feel it there.

Admit it, you are just one of the males,
Don't give me the damn you dun care,
I see you really do, everything you act,
To the tiniest details, i see it now.

Don't you pine over her?
Don't you fantasize her with you?
Because you see, she's really pretty,
And you know you can't get her out.

You come groaning to me about her,
You keep degrading yourself,
Saying you ain't think she'll like u,
Isn't this what it shows all about you,
You really want her, don't you?

Now now, hush hush,
What do you know about love?
What does a 16-year old know about love?
Love is about giving it your all,
To see beyond appearance, see beyond looks, see beyond the way she acts, and everything and you know what?
The way you fear, the way you stop yourself,
Its all your ego that's turning you about.

Now now, don't come and tell me
You are really unique for I can see
You are really no so and I can give
You one piece of advice-
Admit it and get over it.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 56 [informant] => cherangele [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )
Grimme a break

Contributed by cherangele on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:39:43 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



You say you don't like pretty gals,
You say you overlook appearance,
You say there's nuthin much to be enthralled,
For you see, you think you are more than a
Male.

Yet, you think of her, you muse over her,
You complain when you can't get to her
Why won't she answer? Why won't she reply?
And you are still lying through your teeth,
Saying "when did i say i like her?"

She has large, shining eyes,
Fair, flawless skin, one sweet smile,
A great figure, two nice dimples,
Is she not the perfect female,
That your species try so hard to get?

Now, I know why this eventual must come,
The covers must drop, this act must end,
I see through you, with this intuition,
I see it all, and I feel it there.

Admit it, you are just one of the males,
Don't give me the damn you dun care,
I see you really do, everything you act,
To the tiniest details, i see it now.

Don't you pine over her?
Don't you fantasize her with you?
Because you see, she's really pretty,
And you know you can't get her out.

You come groaning to me about her,
You keep degrading yourself,
Saying you ain't think she'll like u,
Isn't this what it shows all about you,
You really want her, don't you?

Now now, hush hush,
What do you know about love?
What does a 16-year old know about love?
Love is about giving it your all,
To see beyond appearance, see beyond looks, see beyond the way she acts, and everything and you know what?
The way you fear, the way you stop yourself,
Its all your ego that's turning you about.

Now now, don't come and tell me
You are really unique for I can see
You are really no so and I can give
You one piece of advice-
Admit it and get over it.





Copyright © cherangele ... [ 2004-04-02 08:39:43]
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Re: Grimme a break (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:50:20 AM AEST
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Yeah, I hate hypocrites, which means I hate myself since I myself can't escape from it. Well-written poem, I so love your sense of sarcasm and direct message.


Re: Grimme a break (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:36:19 PM AEST
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Yessssssssssssssssssss! So much wisdom in this poem. I LOVED it......Kie




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