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Array ( [sid] => 41430 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my hero [time] => 2004-04-02 07:04:25 [hometext] => he helps me...i may add more to this later. x [bodytext] => i stand on the edge of the cliff,
the wind blowing me violently,
threatening to break me with its power,
beckoning me with the threat of a fall,
the jagged peaks strangely welcoming me,
silent with the thought of ending it all,
but your whisper brings me crashing back to reality,
'dont be lost, im here, you wont fall'
and i turn totally silent,
as you pull me from the edge,
and back into your arms...

'are you my hero?' [comments] => 5 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 61 [informant] => lostinmyself [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

my hero

Contributed by lostinmyself on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 07:04:25 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

i stand on the edge of the cliff,
the wind blowing me violently,
threatening to break me with its power,
beckoning me with the threat of a fall,
the jagged peaks strangely welcoming me,
silent with the thought of ending it all,
but your whisper brings me crashing back to reality,
'dont be lost, im here, you wont fall'
and i turn totally silent,
as you pull me from the edge,
and back into your arms...

'are you my hero?'

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-04-02 07:04:25]
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Re: my hero (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:09:50 AM AEST
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A BEAUTIFUL WRITE could picture someone on the cliff and GOD reaching down from heaven and saying your not going cause I love you. you may not of thought of GOD but I did. good write. sandy

Re: my hero (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:28:18 AM AEST
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Very descriptive, interesting...

Silent

Re: my hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:17:48 AM AEST
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I just wrote something similar. I'll have to post it soon. Who is your hero lost? This is good stuff. You are on a roll. Keep writing!
Stitch

Re: my hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:34:26 AM AEST
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I loved that, sort of brings to mind a Prince Charming type. Ah, if only 'twere real.... ;)

Re: my hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:51:17 PM AEST
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Oww what an amazing poem! Made me picture the scene immediately! What a wonderful ending! I really loved this one! Keep it uppie!!
Anne :D

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