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Reality is relative; there's nothing left to trust.
Love is nonexistent; just a fragment of the mind
It could disappear tomorrow, you could leave it all behind.
But if you think of leaving, you're the only one who'll cry
And if your plans are followed, you're the only one who'll die.
And time will go on passing, even when you're dead
For the words that could have saved you never once were said.
They should not be so heartless; they don't know anything
That stranger in the corner could turn out to be the king
For the keeper of the castle is the guardian of the gate
And if you don't get in, well, you might have been too late. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 49 [informant] => Parrotwing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Keeper of the Castle

Contributed by Parrotwing on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:04:31 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Castles burn like forests; even stone will turn to dust
Reality is relative; there's nothing left to trust.
Love is nonexistent; just a fragment of the mind
It could disappear tomorrow, you could leave it all behind.
But if you think of leaving, you're the only one who'll cry
And if your plans are followed, you're the only one who'll die.
And time will go on passing, even when you're dead
For the words that could have saved you never once were said.
They should not be so heartless; they don't know anything
That stranger in the corner could turn out to be the king
For the keeper of the castle is the guardian of the gate
And if you don't get in, well, you might have been too late.

Copyright © Parrotwing ... [ 2004-04-01 23:04:31]
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Re: Keeper of the Castle (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:09:55 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I liked it. I liked the ending and the words used.

Re: Keeper of the Castle (User Rating: 1 )
by AsrealTheFallen10 on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:36:00 PM AEST
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I liked it keep up the good work!
~Peace~

Re: Keeper of the Castle (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:41:30 AM AEST
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Truely Interesting :-)
Loved It.....Keep Em Coming
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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