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I stitch you up with angel hair
so that you'll last forever
and pass the wall of despair

daddy loves you so much
and I do not care
that the world did'nt want you
cause I will always be there

the wounds are crying black tears
for the unwritten dreams of yesterday
I carry you over the wall of despair
past the thorns of reality

we travel past forever
into fields that have no name
onto the footsteps of dawn
here we'll start again [comments] => 7 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 39 [informant] => doug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Past the Wall of Despair

Contributed by doug on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:55:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

tiny porcelain corpse
I stitch you up with angel hair
so that you'll last forever
and pass the wall of despair

daddy loves you so much
and I do not care
that the world did'nt want you
cause I will always be there

the wounds are crying black tears
for the unwritten dreams of yesterday
I carry you over the wall of despair
past the thorns of reality

we travel past forever
into fields that have no name
onto the footsteps of dawn
here we'll start again

Copyright © doug ... [ 2004-04-01 18:55:04]
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Re: Past the Wall of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:24:23 PM AEST
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Smashing.... absolutely smashing. I'm completely speechless.

*stunned silence*

You really did well.

God bless,
Ellen

Re: Past the Wall of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:33:20 PM AEST
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Doug, what can I say. I am so sorry that you had to experience this. Your love shines though it for the child.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: Past the Wall of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:37:42 PM AEST
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wow... I honestly am speechless I don't know what to say this was so damn good and so sad.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Past the Wall of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:28:22 AM AEST
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heartbreaking Im sure your child knows that you love ( he or she) touching write
michelle

Re: Past the Wall of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:14:20 PM AEST
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You did an incredible job putting your feelings, pain and emotion into this poem. I am so sorry for your loss. Kie

Re: Past the Wall of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:01:41 PM AEST
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i'm sorry you have gone through the loss of your child in such a callous manner............no one should have to endure that........i know......and i care.......

Re: Past the Wall of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 10:55:49 AM AEST
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A poem that is sure to deeply touch all that read it.You have done a fine job on such a sad subject.A memorable poem.

Den

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