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circle becomes triangular.
This vocabulary becomes plastic,
as it melts away.
Confusion between numbers and letters,
create definite paralysis of color and shape.
Memorizing happenings found illicit,
trying to remember how to function my calculator.
Operation of one's brain cells,
deplete as the hand believes different.
They say Alzheimer's starts in the later stages of life,
for why am I forgetful at 19?
Ignore it I musn't.
For I am truly scared. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => apollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Memory Loss

Contributed by apollo on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Transition of the rotated axis,
circle becomes triangular.
This vocabulary becomes plastic,
as it melts away.
Confusion between numbers and letters,
create definite paralysis of color and shape.
Memorizing happenings found illicit,
trying to remember how to function my calculator.
Operation of one's brain cells,
deplete as the hand believes different.
They say Alzheimer's starts in the later stages of life,
for why am I forgetful at 19?
Ignore it I musn't.
For I am truly scared.

Copyright © apollo ... [ 2004-04-01 15:39:56]
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Re: Memory Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:44:00 PM AEST
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Sorry to hear this. Well geometry can cause memory loss as well, it quite normal! But seriously I hope it's not a grave thing. Great write
Anne

Re: Memory Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:46:15 PM AEST
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YARGH! The common plight of the over-worked student! (Atleast, that's what I think this one's about.... right? Oh, if it's not, I'll feel like a doof I'll bet) Anyways, I'm completely bowled over by this one. Very well done.

God bless,
Ellen

Re: Memory Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:12:44 PM AEST
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I've always had a poor memory i left my dog outside the fruit and veg shop once! walked straight past him, got him back though felt guilty ever since!
Don't panic i'm sure it's normal i was very forgetful at 19 it was at that age i forgot him!

wildejohnny

Re: Memory Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 12:09:47 PM AEST
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To be forgetful at any age is distressing to say the least. It happens to all both young and old. Do not let it worry you though remember only the elephant never forgets. LOLs.

bernard.

Re: Memory Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:37:16 AM AEST
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i think this poem is amazing. you've put things together really well in this. i like the style. this very true. things like this do happen in life, and they leave an impact, that's either big or small.
i know what you mean, and where you're going with this. i feel it too. never believe that you're alone!

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