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Array ( [sid] => 41322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Grace [time] => 2004-04-01 14:09:00 [hometext] => To my darling sister Nicole, who I just found out is getting married... [bodytext] => the clock crashed through my last beckon
you held on right to the last second
the reckoning made the sound bittersweet
but the day again will still swing free

let nothing hold you down
in grace you'll move as well
and as you change, as you take new name
let nothing hold you down

from afar i can watch you take the chance
coming in place with a surefelt dance
i know that there's nowhere else to go
so i'll come behind to say it must be so

let nothing hold you down
in grace you move so well
and as new change, as you take new name
let nothing hold you down

let nothing hold you down...

in a glimpse i miss so much as i try
there's but one thing that catches eye
i might not know what's in the meaning
for all i can see is you... beaming

let nothing hold you down
in grace you move in well
and as there's change, even with new name
let nothing hold you down

(hope it's not too repeitive...) [comments] => 6 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

In Grace

Contributed by Remy on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:09:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

the clock crashed through my last beckon
you held on right to the last second
the reckoning made the sound bittersweet
but the day again will still swing free

let nothing hold you down
in grace you'll move as well
and as you change, as you take new name
let nothing hold you down

from afar i can watch you take the chance
coming in place with a surefelt dance
i know that there's nowhere else to go
so i'll come behind to say it must be so

let nothing hold you down
in grace you move so well
and as new change, as you take new name
let nothing hold you down

let nothing hold you down...

in a glimpse i miss so much as i try
there's but one thing that catches eye
i might not know what's in the meaning
for all i can see is you... beaming

let nothing hold you down
in grace you move in well
and as there's change, even with new name
let nothing hold you down

(hope it's not too repeitive...)

Copyright © Remy ... [ 2004-04-01 14:09:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:18:54 PM AEST
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Remy, it reads like song lyrics. Very nice thoughts of happiness for her, but maybe you could find someone to put it to music as a present for her.

Rainbows,
Rita

Re: In Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:46:42 PM AEST
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So beautifully written... congrats to your sis! :)

Re: In Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Dove on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:02:15 PM AEST
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What beautiful style that shows your soul just as beautiful..

love
dove

Re: In Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 04:27:14 PM AEST
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Always cherish each other, having a sister is a blessing. Congrats to your sister and I thought your poem was excellent. Kie

Re: In Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:26:33 AM AEST
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Congratulations to your sister, this was a beautiful poem and a wonderful tribute to letting her go to begin a new chapter in life.

Re: In Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:22:35 PM AEST
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that is so sweet im sure she will be thrilled when you give it to her :) your such a thoughtful person

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