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Array ( [sid] => 41298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shattered Deams [time] => 2004-04-01 09:39:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My heart is breaking and again I fee lost
And once again I pay the ultimate cost
I'm fighting back these tears so that you don't see
Exactly how much you're hurting me
I'm trying to be strong but I feel so weak
And once again I feel so incomplete
The images are shattering and the days begin to fade
The moments of being by your side while in your bed we laid
Confused and hurting because you don't know what you want
Another chapter of my past that will continue to haunt
Why is she better, why do you like her more
Why is this relationship like all the ones before
Why am I not used to this, why does it still hurt
And once again the ghost returns but is staying here to lerk. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CuttersAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Shattered Deams

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My heart is breaking and again I fee lost
And once again I pay the ultimate cost
I'm fighting back these tears so that you don't see
Exactly how much you're hurting me
I'm trying to be strong but I feel so weak
And once again I feel so incomplete
The images are shattering and the days begin to fade
The moments of being by your side while in your bed we laid
Confused and hurting because you don't know what you want
Another chapter of my past that will continue to haunt
Why is she better, why do you like her more
Why is this relationship like all the ones before
Why am I not used to this, why does it still hurt
And once again the ghost returns but is staying here to lerk.

Copyright © CuttersAngel ... [ 2004-04-01 09:39:04]
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Re: Shattered Deams (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:00:45 AM AEST
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Good rhyming and flow, sorry you are hurting. I say get rid of him but what do I know lol.

Ali xx

Re: Shattered Deams (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:08:40 AM AEST
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Great poem, so full of emotion. I felt every word.

Re: Shattered Deams (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:25:58 AM AEST
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so sad...im feeling exactly the same as this right now. this is a great, emotional poem. i can feel everyword. luv phil xxx

Re: Shattered Deams (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:14:24 PM AEST
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wow, once again Cilla u've amazed me with the beauty and eloquence of your words. I could ramble on and on but it wouldn't do it justice so I'll simply say good poem.

Bobo (Joel)

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