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I sit by the pond throwing seeds of disgust
But punish I will, spilling blood is a must

Blade at your side with a beautiful grin
Twisting and turning sliding slowly within

Blood curdling screams fill the air of the night
That look in your eyes, your pain my delight

I sit by the water the color now red
Tranquillity restored, nothing more to be said.......
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Dangerous Games

Contributed by silent on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:07:07 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I sit by the pond throwing seeds of disgust
But punish I will, spilling blood is a must

Blade at your side with a beautiful grin
Twisting and turning sliding slowly within

Blood curdling screams fill the air of the night
That look in your eyes, your pain my delight

I sit by the water the color now red
Tranquillity restored, nothing more to be said.......

Copyright © silent ... [ 2004-04-01 07:07:07]
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Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:20:13 AM AEST
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Out of the disgust and after the deed the pain is to me and not to the one. Very good poem, I looked in the mirror. Thank you

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:32:25 AM AEST
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It's amazing how you packed so much power, strenght and meaning into such a short poem. Inspiringly well written. This poem has real depth. I'm glad I read it.

liquidsunshine

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:15:48 AM AEST
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OUCH! I love the first line. This is dark, sharp, and quick.
Stitch

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:41:06 AM AEST
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*Coughcough* Note to self: Never get on your bad side. Nice poem, liked the couplet structure and even though it's short it still manages to thrill you. Well done. Another beer? :)

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:23:31 AM AEST
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deep and meaningful a really enjoyable read.

wildejohnny.

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:45:22 AM AEST
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ohhhh this was so cool. so chilling and dark and the flow was so awesome!
i just love this. well done.
Arden

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:19:47 PM AEST
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Very Well Done :-) I Enjoyed Reading This Poem.....Very Dark Write....Loved It.......
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:57:52 PM AEST
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Ahhhh gave me the shivers... that was a really chilling poem, so much in so little words... i could almost imagine myself next to the pond, watching what was going on... thank you for sharing Silent, got my entire body to react... :)

Lindsey

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by Saitou-sama on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:43:43 PM AEST
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This sent shivers up my spine. It was so captivating even though it was so short. The only problem I have is the length. I need more!

Re: Dangerous Games (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:36:17 AM AEST
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ooh very dark.. i love it..
charlotte x_x_x

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