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Array ( [sid] => 41286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can YOU? [time] => 2004-04-01 06:52:17 [hometext] => Can anyone....? [bodytext] => Can you see what I see?
Darkness, no light
White walls, all around
Small space, claustrophobic
Can you see?

Can you hear what I hear?
No silence, loud noise
Mouths screaming, all around
Loud noises, Deafening
Can you hear?

Can you taste what I taste?
Blood, As it runs
In my throat, all around
Choking me, I'm Drowning
Can you taste?

Can you smell what I smell?
Death, So close
In my head, all around
It echoes, The Aromas
Can you smell?

Can you feel what I feel?
Pain, My whole body
From your hands, all around
In Agony, Destruction
Can you feel?


[comments] => 7 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 6 [informant] => strange_lindsey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Can YOU?

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:52:17 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Can you see what I see?
Darkness, no light
White walls, all around
Small space, claustrophobic
Can you see?

Can you hear what I hear?
No silence, loud noise
Mouths screaming, all around
Loud noises, Deafening
Can you hear?

Can you taste what I taste?
Blood, As it runs
In my throat, all around
Choking me, I'm Drowning
Can you taste?

Can you smell what I smell?
Death, So close
In my head, all around
It echoes, The Aromas
Can you smell?

Can you feel what I feel?
Pain, My whole body
From your hands, all around
In Agony, Destruction
Can you feel?






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Re: Can YOU? (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:59:30 AM AEST
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Wow, such a tortured write---and spanning all the senses in a morose yet captivating way. The darkness portrayed here is superceded only by the skill with which it is written. Magnificent, original, it's got it all.

Truly,
-Dan


Re: Can YOU? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:05:11 AM AEST
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I feel, and smell and taste and walk hand in hand, you have expressed my inner thoughts in this poem.. Thank you


Re: Can YOU? (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:06:55 AM AEST
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I second dans comment on this one, the darkness and pain expressed within these words matches the talent of the writer, a pure joy to read, very inspirational, i love the imagery within the words, the whole poem just seemed to flow from start to end, so i re read it, and it was even better than the first time, so far ive read it about 12 times :D

Luke


Re: Can YOU? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:43:44 PM AEST
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wow this touched me deeply... I've been there before... loved it all.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Can YOU? (User Rating: 1 )
by Saitou-sama on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 11:45:56 PM AEST
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This was really good. The first thought that came to mind though, was that Christmas song. You know, "Do you hear what I hear?"


Re: Can YOU? (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:25:22 PM AEST
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I just love the way you worded this . . . so elegantly done and very trademark-YOU.

--Nora


Re: Can YOU? (User Rating: 1 )
by Thivanka on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:48:49 AM AEST
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I really do enjoy your dar poems madam, they are really absorbing.
-Thivanka




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