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Array ( [sid] => 41233 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Days [time] => 2004-03-31 23:39:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everyone says, that when I die,
They will care,
& They will cry...

But here today my coffin lies,
Awaiting my lifeless body,
Still I have yet to die,
But none do detect, my life rotting.

No one seems to notice now,
The hurt inside,
The pain I hide...

Funny how the world goes on,
No trace of cares or worry,
But when life is over, and loved ones are gone,
The fear, the pain, replaces in such a hurry.

Little do they know, that tommorow,
Will come too fast,
And just may be,
The Last... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 285 [topic] => 13 [informant] => morelikelyrics [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Last Days

Contributed by morelikelyrics on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:39:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Everyone says, that when I die,
They will care,
& They will cry...

But here today my coffin lies,
Awaiting my lifeless body,
Still I have yet to die,
But none do detect, my life rotting.

No one seems to notice now,
The hurt inside,
The pain I hide...

Funny how the world goes on,
No trace of cares or worry,
But when life is over, and loved ones are gone,
The fear, the pain, replaces in such a hurry.

Little do they know, that tommorow,
Will come too fast,
And just may be,
The Last...

Copyright © morelikelyrics ... [ 2004-03-31 23:39:43]
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Re: Last Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:30:07 AM AEST
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morbid! and well written i enjoyed this immensely.

wildejohnny.

Re: Last Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:48:30 AM AEST
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What can I say...I LOVED IT...Nice and Dark.
Great Write :D

(V)ortis-Dark

Re: Last Days (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:51:00 AM AEST
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This is good i hope things begin lookin up for you. You have a great talent!

Re: Last Days (User Rating: 1 )
by saveMEfromMYSELF on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:11:52 AM AEST
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Seven words:
Nice and keep up the good work!!!

Re: Last Days (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:03:51 AM AEST
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Well done! I luved how u put it and how no one realizes anything until they die.. its just sad though becuz there are many people feeling like their being ignored and once they die people suddenly care.. and they dont realize the pain anyones been feeling.. its just sad.. Great write! keep it ^
*XoXoXo*

Re: Last Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 02:16:04 PM AEST
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very beautiful. This one is very unique poem I have never seen. I enjoyed the wonderful read.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

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