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Array ( [sid] => 41228 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Die inside of me [time] => 2004-03-31 23:08:58 [hometext] => I wrote this because of the pain I am feeling from time to time. It seems all the love, dreams, and feelings I have, die day by day. I cant stand this anymore. Enjoy.. MaJ [bodytext] => -----_____------

Most days now
I breakdown somehow
I gave you my soul everyday
And you just gave it away

In your world somewhere
Do my memories rip and tare
I remember all we would dream
And all the dreams we will never see

I am just sitting here by myself
I know you found someone else
How could leave me?
Stranded in this pool of misery

The angels cried tonight
As the rain washed that lonely place from my eyes
And they softly said
My heart would never make it out alive

They made no sound
Then good-bye
My dreams make no sound
As they die

Love don’t call on me again
I never want to cry like this
Die like this

No more, my life at its end
I never want to die like this
Cry like this.

With-in my eyes
On hearts the faithless can’t rely
Do my dreams make no sound
as they die?

Remembering the nights
by the river side
No secrets from my sins
And the world would not subside

And the worst thing
Is knowing I will survive
As my dreams made no sounds
As they died

And silently within
With hands touching skin
The shock breaks my disease
And I can finally breathe

All of my weight and all I dream
Dies inside of me
All the light, and beauty love brings
Dies inside of me

I think I am ripping apart at the seams
And I find it hard to believe
I feel like I am living inside a dream
That no one believes and no one sees.

With the tears in my eyes
My dreams die
I don’t want to cry like this anymore
I don’t want to die like this anymore!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 506 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Die inside of me

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 11:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



-----_____------

Most days now
I breakdown somehow
I gave you my soul everyday
And you just gave it away

In your world somewhere
Do my memories rip and tare
I remember all we would dream
And all the dreams we will never see

I am just sitting here by myself
I know you found someone else
How could leave me?
Stranded in this pool of misery

The angels cried tonight
As the rain washed that lonely place from my eyes
And they softly said
My heart would never make it out alive

They made no sound
Then good-bye
My dreams make no sound
As they die

Love don’t call on me again
I never want to cry like this
Die like this

No more, my life at its end
I never want to die like this
Cry like this.

With-in my eyes
On hearts the faithless can’t rely
Do my dreams make no sound
as they die?

Remembering the nights
by the river side
No secrets from my sins
And the world would not subside

And the worst thing
Is knowing I will survive
As my dreams made no sounds
As they died

And silently within
With hands touching skin
The shock breaks my disease
And I can finally breathe

All of my weight and all I dream
Dies inside of me
All the light, and beauty love brings
Dies inside of me

I think I am ripping apart at the seams
And I find it hard to believe
I feel like I am living inside a dream
That no one believes and no one sees.

With the tears in my eyes
My dreams die
I don’t want to cry like this anymore
I don’t want to die like this anymore!




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2004-03-31 23:08:58]
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Re: Die inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:33:26 AM AEST
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This is good! Great job!


Re: Die inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by mystiquepearl on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:11:11 AM AEST
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wow...this is touching..you really put your emotions in your peom that i really feel it... this is how i felt when i lost my love..good job.. and hang in there... world can be cruel sometimes... hugs and kisses




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