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Array ( [sid] => 41218 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is All Said and Done [time] => 2004-03-31 22:36:01 [hometext] => Got some news from the Doc today and it scared me... [bodytext] => If I promise not to say anything Unkind.
And If I promise that I will live the rest of my Life Honest and Good
Will God return my voice to me?

As I fell like a Motherless Child,
The tears stained my Friends Blouse.
But without a pause,
No hint at all
She let me fall weeping into her arms.

"My world was coming apart," I sobbed.
My faith felt bruised and shattered.
I walked this day as if in a Dream
My Fear , My Doubts
King Kong

This sound I make is mine Alone.
And I thought I used it Wisely.
But when it Faded and Never Came Back
I took myself in hand
Thinking about Words, I'd said in Love or Anger
Are sounds I took for Granted.

But I can no longer Say the Words you long to hear.
My throat has Shut .
No words come out .
I'm thrown into a World of Silence
Its No Fun to Hear and Not join in .
When my contributions to the conversation
would Heighten , Brighten and Cheer.

I promise not to say a Unkind word against My Fellow Man
If I promise, To be a Kinder, More Gentle , More Patient?
More Willing to understand.
I 'II Look Further into the Wonders and try to forget the Rest
The ugly, deprived, unwholesome and the All the Acts.

But what if after All is Said and Done
And still - if It is unoperateable -
Will I be Willing enuff to Let Go
And accept my Final Fate.

Whisper
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Is All Said and Done

Contributed by Whisper on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 10:36:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



If I promise not to say anything Unkind.
And If I promise that I will live the rest of my Life Honest and Good
Will God return my voice to me?

As I fell like a Motherless Child,
The tears stained my Friends Blouse.
But without a pause,
No hint at all
She let me fall weeping into her arms.

"My world was coming apart," I sobbed.
My faith felt bruised and shattered.
I walked this day as if in a Dream
My Fear , My Doubts
King Kong

This sound I make is mine Alone.
And I thought I used it Wisely.
But when it Faded and Never Came Back
I took myself in hand
Thinking about Words, I'd said in Love or Anger
Are sounds I took for Granted.

But I can no longer Say the Words you long to hear.
My throat has Shut .
No words come out .
I'm thrown into a World of Silence
Its No Fun to Hear and Not join in .
When my contributions to the conversation
would Heighten , Brighten and Cheer.

I promise not to say a Unkind word against My Fellow Man
If I promise, To be a Kinder, More Gentle , More Patient?
More Willing to understand.
I 'II Look Further into the Wonders and try to forget the Rest
The ugly, deprived, unwholesome and the All the Acts.

But what if after All is Said and Done
And still - if It is unoperateable -
Will I be Willing enuff to Let Go
And accept my Final Fate.

Whisper




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Re: Is All Said and Done (User Rating: 1 )
by badlander on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:05:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful,heartfelt. Good luck, hope all works out.
tony


Re: Is All Said and Done (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:17:12 AM AEST
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Great Write, Heartfelt...
Wish You The Best Of Luck....
Hope Everything Works Out For You.
For I Sorta Know What Your Going Through.
I've Lost My Voice To Cancer...I've Not Lost It Completely Though..
Hope This Isn't Your Case...
Good Luck God Bless...
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,


Re: Is All Said and Done (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 09:49:12 AM AEST
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First and formost... blessings to you. I have a saying, "it's not over till it's over." Nothing you did or said caused any of your illness... so take heart and know we all here care and will help pull your load.

Justalady, Hugs June




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