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Array ( [sid] => 4118 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => XENIA (2) [time] => 2002-09-21 20:15:25 [hometext] => For my daughter, at 5 years old [bodytext] => Oh, Xenia my darling, it is still with you
Each time I walk past, you still say it too
One year on, you're still going strong
Every time I see you, I hear your 'loves song'

You say it with all, the warmth of your heart
You send with it, a kiss as a part
I can never be blue, all the time you're around
Because of your "I love you", that's a magical sound

You are my daughter, and you are now five
And now all my life, I am going to strive
To help you hang on, to this magical potion
That you have inside, for it changes all emotions

I don't want you to lose, this wonderful thing
That changes night to day, and makes the birds sing
With this love that you have, so deep down inside
You have a potential, to change a world of bad tides

Mick Puttock

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XENIA (2)

Contributed by Mick_Puttock on Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 08:15:25 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Oh, Xenia my darling, it is still with you
Each time I walk past, you still say it too
One year on, you're still going strong
Every time I see you, I hear your 'loves song'

You say it with all, the warmth of your heart
You send with it, a kiss as a part
I can never be blue, all the time you're around
Because of your "I love you", that's a magical sound

You are my daughter, and you are now five
And now all my life, I am going to strive
To help you hang on, to this magical potion
That you have inside, for it changes all emotions

I don't want you to lose, this wonderful thing
That changes night to day, and makes the birds sing
With this love that you have, so deep down inside
You have a potential, to change a world of bad tides

Mick Puttock

Copyright © Mick_Puttock ... [ 2002-09-21 20:15:25]
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Re: XENIA (2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST
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I am sure as the years roll by Mick that Xenia will treasure all the poems written by her dad. I hope that all in all that maybe on her 21st you hand her a book full of verses that you have written for her. great write can feel the love you have for her as do all parents for there youngins'.
peace love and happy poetry

Re: XENIA (2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 10:19:42 PM AEST
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Very touching Mick, a wonderful way to express one's love,

Re: XENIA (2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 01:25:51 AM AEST
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Beautiful, Mick...Xenia must be very special indeed..
Chrissie

Re: XENIA (2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 01:49:54 AM AEST
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Hey Mickster.... "Wise One" will always be the warm and loving girl that she is today.. you have written another beautiful tribute to Xenia and I hope another is coming soon..
Hugs,
Jen

Re: XENIA (2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 10:52:11 AM AEST
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Such wise advice in a beautiful write. I hope too, she can hold on to her innocent love of life, the feelings of children and how open thier minds are....
touching write,
Amber Rose :)

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