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Array ( [sid] => 41100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Done [time] => 2004-03-31 03:10:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'M DONE

What I feel for you words can't explain
What I feel for you wasn't easy to obtain
It's like you're my sunshine when there is rain
Although most times I don't show it, and instead give you pain

I hate the thought of all that I put you through
I know now why you feel forced to do what you do
All that's happened is due to me, this is true
But I'll spend a lifetime to try and make it up to you

The pain I've already caused I can't erase
But I'll do my best to have joyous things take its place
Things have been bad and this is something I must face
I know how you feel; that the last year was a waste

But I do believe there will be better days
Our future is bright, I know this because I prayed
I prayed for answers and recieved them in many ways
And every answer points to our relationship being saved

I know it's worth it to stay together
I know we need to start to pray together
There's nothing, but ourselves, to stop us from doing whatever
But a key part to this is being a couple forever

The seperation of you and me feels so wrong
Even if just for a day it seems way too long
Without you in my life I honestly can't go on
That's why everytime we talk about it, I make the conversation prolonged

Please believe me when I tell you everything will be okay
We both know it's true that this won't happen in a day
But from here on out I'll work twice as hard to repay
All I ask in return is to know you're mine every day

I know these are just words and they don't mean a thing
Because it's the action that follows that'll prove what I mean
Nothing in this world will prevent my love for you from being seen
You will forever be my love and deserve to be treated more like a Queen

I know for you this relationship hasn't been much fun
And this has to change in order for me to be your number one
I can't say sorry enough, I know your stress weighs a ton
So I have to change my ways, which is why I named this poem
... I'm Done
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 50 [informant] => mindfull [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
I'm Done

Contributed by mindfull on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:10:59 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



I'M DONE

What I feel for you words can't explain
What I feel for you wasn't easy to obtain
It's like you're my sunshine when there is rain
Although most times I don't show it, and instead give you pain

I hate the thought of all that I put you through
I know now why you feel forced to do what you do
All that's happened is due to me, this is true
But I'll spend a lifetime to try and make it up to you

The pain I've already caused I can't erase
But I'll do my best to have joyous things take its place
Things have been bad and this is something I must face
I know how you feel; that the last year was a waste

But I do believe there will be better days
Our future is bright, I know this because I prayed
I prayed for answers and recieved them in many ways
And every answer points to our relationship being saved

I know it's worth it to stay together
I know we need to start to pray together
There's nothing, but ourselves, to stop us from doing whatever
But a key part to this is being a couple forever

The seperation of you and me feels so wrong
Even if just for a day it seems way too long
Without you in my life I honestly can't go on
That's why everytime we talk about it, I make the conversation prolonged

Please believe me when I tell you everything will be okay
We both know it's true that this won't happen in a day
But from here on out I'll work twice as hard to repay
All I ask in return is to know you're mine every day

I know these are just words and they don't mean a thing
Because it's the action that follows that'll prove what I mean
Nothing in this world will prevent my love for you from being seen
You will forever be my love and deserve to be treated more like a Queen

I know for you this relationship hasn't been much fun
And this has to change in order for me to be your number one
I can't say sorry enough, I know your stress weighs a ton
So I have to change my ways, which is why I named this poem
... I'm Done




Copyright © mindfull ... [ 2004-03-31 03:10:59]
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Re: I'm Done (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:18:15 AM AEST
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Just words but beautiful ones. Excellent poem. It's very sad that you are seperated from someone you love so much and I pray that they will accept your apologies. Welcome to YPDC.
~JadedExistence~


Re: I'm Done (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:54:15 AM AEST
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This is really well written ... and I hope that things work out for you in the end ... great write ... Jan




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