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I cry when I am sad
I cry when I have lost all the things I ever had

Sometimes Im filled sorrow
Sometimes Im filled pain
Sometimes I cant control the things that are going on today

I feel that I have hurt you
I feel that you are sad
I feel that I have caused you more pain than what you had

I wish that you could tell me, how you really feel
I wonder if the thoughts I have are even close to being real

I think that you may love me
I think I love you too

But I think we're in perdicerments and dont know what to do
I dont know why i bother
I dont know why i try
I dont why im asking you at this point in time

Maybe its true love, maybe its just lust
Maybe we enjoy just hanging out with us

I thought Id say Im sorry
I dont know what to do
all i know is that I cant cease to think of you!

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Torn

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:08:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I cry when I am angry
I cry when I am sad
I cry when I have lost all the things I ever had

Sometimes Im filled sorrow
Sometimes Im filled pain
Sometimes I cant control the things that are going on today

I feel that I have hurt you
I feel that you are sad
I feel that I have caused you more pain than what you had

I wish that you could tell me, how you really feel
I wonder if the thoughts I have are even close to being real

I think that you may love me
I think I love you too

But I think we're in perdicerments and dont know what to do
I dont know why i bother
I dont know why i try
I dont why im asking you at this point in time

Maybe its true love, maybe its just lust
Maybe we enjoy just hanging out with us

I thought Id say Im sorry
I dont know what to do
all i know is that I cant cease to think of you!

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-03-31 03:08:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:27:08 AM AEST
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Ooh..it is sad..but all your feelings well expressed..venkat

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:22:45 AM AEST
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Emotional and sad piece...the first verse especially touched me. Well done.

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 10:27:11 AM AEST
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I really liked the flow of this poem! Hmm the difficulties in a relation....Very well expressed!
Anne :D

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:51:19 PM AEST
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so so sad and yet the flow is so beautiful. i love this one. well done.
Arden

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:00:03 PM AEST
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I echo all the above comments...
~Donna~

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:27:09 PM AEST
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this is so sad,thers so much emotion...continue the good work!
luv always

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:11:45 AM AEST
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hope you find love...i miss the feeling. follow youre heart, youve got a good one lol...very good write. your words are increadible

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:44:53 AM AEST
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NICELY WRITTEN & VERY THOUGHT OUT!
YOU DID A GREAT JOB WITH THIS!!
LOL-DAN!!!

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:46:17 AM AEST
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What a tearing dilemma. Good write that keeps haunting you.
Hur

Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:29:13 AM AEST
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I agree.
Very sad but great writing!
luv, huggs, hope,
emy

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