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my seductive eyes.
You completely trust me
as it appears that I'm
going to affectionately
kiss your cheek.
But I swoop too far-- too close.
I aim for your neck and
my sharp teeth puncture your
pale skin.
You scream in terrorized pain,
only to fall limp in seconds.
I drain your body of its essence,
so sweet and addictive on
my tongue.
I drink and drink from
the fountain of youth.
I feel so alive as I
suck the life from your body.
The coppery crimson fills me,
making me whole.
You have no idea how
satisfying it is to
look into someone's
eyes as they die.
Watching all their
emotions and memories
flowing out of them in
red tears as they
breath their last breath. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 13 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Vamp Night Kiss

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:38:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I hypnotize you with
my seductive eyes.
You completely trust me
as it appears that I'm
going to affectionately
kiss your cheek.
But I swoop too far-- too close.
I aim for your neck and
my sharp teeth puncture your
pale skin.
You scream in terrorized pain,
only to fall limp in seconds.
I drain your body of its essence,
so sweet and addictive on
my tongue.
I drink and drink from
the fountain of youth.
I feel so alive as I
suck the life from your body.
The coppery crimson fills me,
making me whole.
You have no idea how
satisfying it is to
look into someone's
eyes as they die.
Watching all their
emotions and memories
flowing out of them in
red tears as they
breath their last breath.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-03-30 23:38:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Vamp Night Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:20:44 AM AEST
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WOW this is really good!

Re: Vamp Night Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:29:13 AM AEST
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I LOVE IT SO DARK SO GRAND SUCH A GREAT WRITE

(V)ortis-Dark

Re: Vamp Night Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:01:32 AM AEST
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Awesome write, so dark and compelling.
You done well with this poem keep on writing.

Re: Vamp Night Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:07:44 PM AEST
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ohhh i love vampires! this was so dark and chilling wow. just awesome. well done
Arden

Re: Vamp Night Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by parkman on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:45:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful, eerie, lustful write, excellent

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