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Array ( [sid] => 41030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Emergency,Call [time] => 2004-03-30 18:01:21 [hometext] => please leave a comment,thanx!!!!! [bodytext] => save your quarter,save it for someone
who might actually care,cuz i'm
sick of you and your lazy
***** *****,get the ***** off my coutch

everytime you light your smoke
we all know whats to come
(children crying,dogs barking,sounds of flaming burning
and parents flipping out)

emergency,call 911,our house is burning
down,the ***** killed us once again
emergency,call 911,you guys might as
well not even show up,we're already dead

you're so lazy,you haven't worked a
day in your life in the past 36
***** years,you're unresponsible,unreliable
you're so pathetic,you're a grade 8 drop out

here i am only 15 years old,making
something of myself,you've made
something of course,you made a *****
*****,who's ungreatful,lazy and a drunk

emergency,call 911,our house is burning
down,the ***** killed us once again
emergency,call 911,you guys might as
well not even show up,we're already dead [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 6 [informant] => cheech [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Emergency,Call

Contributed by cheech on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:01:21 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

save your quarter,save it for someone
who might actually care,cuz i'm
sick of you and your lazy
***** *****,get the ***** off my coutch

everytime you light your smoke
we all know whats to come
(children crying,dogs barking,sounds of flaming burning
and parents flipping out)

emergency,call 911,our house is burning
down,the ***** killed us once again
emergency,call 911,you guys might as
well not even show up,we're already dead

you're so lazy,you haven't worked a
day in your life in the past 36
***** years,you're unresponsible,unreliable
you're so pathetic,you're a grade 8 drop out

here i am only 15 years old,making
something of myself,you've made
something of course,you made a *****
*****,who's ungreatful,lazy and a drunk

emergency,call 911,our house is burning
down,the ***** killed us once again
emergency,call 911,you guys might as
well not even show up,we're already dead

Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-03-30 18:01:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Emergency,Call (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:34:40 PM AEST
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Truthfully rather too angry for my taste... I liked darker hued poetry but less of an angry shout/rant like this with more poetic grace perhaps...but that being said.. you have quite an emotional outburst..a rather powerful piece of work..less swearing would make the meaning clearer perhaps.
Can't say I like it but it is a powerful work nonetheless....to each their own...I guess

Re: Emergency,Call (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:27:03 AM AEST
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I agree with the swearing part but also it seems the more emphasis is put on rage it appears to me to deintensify the effect. But that being said it is a true and very angry but justified write. Only my opion though.

Nice one anyway.

Re: Emergency,Call (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:40:31 AM AEST
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Well I thought this was a great poem, sounds to me like you have every right to be angry, whoever you are talking about sounds very selfish and arrogant.

Ali xx

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