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Array ( [sid] => 41003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => His kid too [time] => 2004-03-30 16:16:11 [hometext] => Britney Godin, my best friend, this was written for you, so srry sweetie, hang on! [bodytext] => sitting, waiting
hoping, anticipating
for him to come
to show me he cares
to be by my side
he has no idea
i love him so much
his heart and soul
so much to offer
not enough to take
someone to love
and to love back
no one knows
how much it hurts
to find your man
in anothers arms
with only yourself
you cant recover
you need him
and he doesnt know
but doesnt care
all at the same time
if only he did
if only you did
but you don't
and he never will
anothers arms
snuggly warm
comforting him
not caring at all
not thinking of you
ever again
if only he knew
it's his kid too [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

His kid too

Contributed by SAT on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:16:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

sitting, waiting
hoping, anticipating
for him to come
to show me he cares
to be by my side
he has no idea
i love him so much
his heart and soul
so much to offer
not enough to take
someone to love
and to love back
no one knows
how much it hurts
to find your man
in anothers arms
with only yourself
you cant recover
you need him
and he doesnt know
but doesnt care
all at the same time
if only he did
if only you did
but you don't
and he never will
anothers arms
snuggly warm
comforting him
not caring at all
not thinking of you
ever again
if only he knew
it's his kid too

Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-03-30 16:16:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: His kid too (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:34:15 PM AEST
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erg... tough bit to bite on. hope things look up sometime soon for her, good write! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: His kid too (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:55:24 PM AEST
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i feel for ur friend.... my bro is doing the same ***** to some girl... she is pregnant with his kid and now he is being stupid about things....... hopefully guys will grow up sum day :) no offense guys

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