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Array ( [sid] => 40983 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll be your sunshine, Dear [time] => 2004-03-30 12:10:14 [hometext] => This is, I repeat, this is not a poem for a lover, but rather a very close friend of mine. [bodytext] => Faeries of brackish waves
do their little dance around my nose
while the sun is bronzing my skin
sending it's rays to add a new pigment
and it's funny how all I can think about is him

walking down the boulevard
the pavement disowning my feet with every step
frantic people rushing their little bodies to huge companies
they never fail to brush my shoulder, without a care, nor a word
and it's ironic how apathetic I am, because it's he who's on my mind

laying in an ocean of sheets
the silk coddling my body gently
and throughout the whole patter of my dramatic friends conversation
of their theatrical like lives and boyfriends
I can't seem to forget the million ways he made my lips curl in

throwing rocks into the gentle river current
watching them gall the water, sinking like their lives depended on it
the rain adding a sense of relaxation to the whole scenario
and the sun's setting off by the city( I can see the building lights from here)
It's reminding me of the nights, the days, the hours he spent wasting his time to comfort me

Locked up in a jail the society requires each of my kind to endure
Passing little pale sheets of paper with scribbled notes
and toning out teachers sending futile attempts to make us learn
the fabricated world they make us belive in, and oh my the ceiling lights are bright
blinding my eyes, but making me see, he's out there perhaps thinking of me

waiting on the bus stop oak bench
drawing pictures with my fingers in the overhead clouds
only thinking, right this moment, about one thing
the sunshine creeping through the fog that lays at bay
" I'm his sunshine" I say, " And he's my rainy day "


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 16 [informant] => loserxnextdoor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
I'll be your sunshine, Dear

Contributed by loserxnextdoor on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:10:14 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Faeries of brackish waves
do their little dance around my nose
while the sun is bronzing my skin
sending it's rays to add a new pigment
and it's funny how all I can think about is him

walking down the boulevard
the pavement disowning my feet with every step
frantic people rushing their little bodies to huge companies
they never fail to brush my shoulder, without a care, nor a word
and it's ironic how apathetic I am, because it's he who's on my mind

laying in an ocean of sheets
the silk coddling my body gently
and throughout the whole patter of my dramatic friends conversation
of their theatrical like lives and boyfriends
I can't seem to forget the million ways he made my lips curl in

throwing rocks into the gentle river current
watching them gall the water, sinking like their lives depended on it
the rain adding a sense of relaxation to the whole scenario
and the sun's setting off by the city( I can see the building lights from here)
It's reminding me of the nights, the days, the hours he spent wasting his time to comfort me

Locked up in a jail the society requires each of my kind to endure
Passing little pale sheets of paper with scribbled notes
and toning out teachers sending futile attempts to make us learn
the fabricated world they make us belive in, and oh my the ceiling lights are bright
blinding my eyes, but making me see, he's out there perhaps thinking of me

waiting on the bus stop oak bench
drawing pictures with my fingers in the overhead clouds
only thinking, right this moment, about one thing
the sunshine creeping through the fog that lays at bay
" I'm his sunshine" I say, " And he's my rainy day "






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Re: I'll be your sunshine, Dear (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:28:07 PM AEST
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Good poem; a great tribute to a friend, I enjoyed reading this work many thanks from bernard.


Re: I'll be your sunshine, Dear (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:36:14 PM AEST
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beautifully written. loved reading it well done keep it up.
Arden




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