Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:13:33 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 40963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => AT THAT MOMENT [time] => 2004-03-30 09:22:25 [hometext] => answer secretwind Sensations Of Melting [bodytext] =>

Our moon acentuates
the heavens
at that moment
my heart exploded
into a star
jus sailin
on a
secretwind-
Blinking, blink, blink.

We were one
at that moment
sensations
we share
accross time
under our moon
at that moment
sweet luvin
sensations
come 2 me
on a breeze
of
The secretwind! [comments] => 12 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 43 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 28 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

AT THAT MOMENT

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:22:25 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Our moon acentuates
the heavens
at that moment
my heart exploded
into a star
jus sailin
on a
secretwind-
Blinking, blink, blink.

We were one
at that moment
sensations
we share
accross time
under our moon
at that moment
sweet luvin
sensations
come 2 me
on a breeze
of
The secretwind!

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-03-30 09:22:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:04:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

AREN'T YOU SO SWEET! ALSO A GREAT WRITER & TRUE LOVER!! KEEP BRINGING THEM ON!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:37:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i really liked this a lot, and enjoyed reading it...as i do all your work..keep them coming

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:53:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

thats very joyful.... and the way you incorpate nature... its very good :)

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:48:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

awww emy!! this is beautiful!! hugs n' love nessa

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:16:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awww Emy, this is such a nice write. I loved it. *S* Cynthia

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:25:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

short and sweet. very nice poem. well written. love this. well done keep em coming.
Arden

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:58:06 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awww Emy How Lovely
I Like This :-)
Great Write Girl/Friend
Keep Em Coming,,,,,

Hugs
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:52:18 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow, sensuous :) I like it a lot. Well done.

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:42:49 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow..what a sensuous poem..very sweet..have a nice day. venkat

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:37:22 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well done...so sweet.....

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:14:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awww this is so beautiful ... romance in the air ... I can feel it... hugs Jan

Re: AT THAT MOMENT (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:50:04 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I like your Secretwind collection.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com