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Array ( [sid] => 40945 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A brush with Sweetness [time] => 2004-03-30 04:33:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => All my mind does is wonder about him
In the sun light
I see his eyes shine
In the moon light
I see his eyes bright
In the Skies
I see his eyes
In a different way
In the crowded star night
I see his eyes sparkling, Astonishing and clear
His kiss I think of late at night
As my room is silent

A brush of sweetness
Only a heart that loves so dearly
Can remember how it felt
I think if he would only let me in
To his heart that I want to get to know well
In every breath that I take
He is there
My heart wants to claim his
Does he want to claim mine?

His lips
So tender
His touch filled with warmth
His lips taste so sweet
I want them all the time
Every chance that I get

Where nothing speaks more clearly
Than our hearts beating as one
Only becoming one with him
A brush of sweetness
Can be so sweet with him [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 2 [informant] => GrayStar_909 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

A brush with Sweetness

Contributed by GrayStar_909 on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:33:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

All my mind does is wonder about him
In the sun light
I see his eyes shine
In the moon light
I see his eyes bright
In the Skies
I see his eyes
In a different way
In the crowded star night
I see his eyes sparkling, Astonishing and clear
His kiss I think of late at night
As my room is silent

A brush of sweetness
Only a heart that loves so dearly
Can remember how it felt
I think if he would only let me in
To his heart that I want to get to know well
In every breath that I take
He is there
My heart wants to claim his
Does he want to claim mine?

His lips
So tender
His touch filled with warmth
His lips taste so sweet
I want them all the time
Every chance that I get

Where nothing speaks more clearly
Than our hearts beating as one
Only becoming one with him
A brush of sweetness
Can be so sweet with him

Copyright © GrayStar_909 ... [ 2004-03-30 04:33:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A brush with Sweetness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jupiter on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:39:04 AM AEST
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Very sweet and romantic. It remindes me of my girlfriend and I. I very much enjoyed it. Great Job! Keep up the good work!
-Steve-

Re: A brush with Sweetness (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:17:55 AM AEST
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Very nice write. I enjoyed.

Re: A brush with Sweetness (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:13:04 PM AEST
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Young or old... the brush with sweetness is always the same. Romantic and yet there is agony untill the sweetness is returned. June

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