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Array ( [sid] => 40895 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => memories of our first meeting [time] => 2004-03-29 22:21:23 [hometext] => this is my first try so i hope you all like it...i made this poem for someone special [bodytext] => you came to me as a perfect stranger
the sun gives you radiance making you shine through the crowd
your beautiful hazel eyes sparkle and captivates me
suddenly my whole world focus just on you

the sun gives you radiance making you shine through the crowd
you walk towards me like my graceful knight of light
suddenly my whole world focus just on you
the truth you do not know is i love you the first time i saw you

you walk toward me like my graceful knight of light
you've been in my dreams ever since
the truth you do not know is i love you the first time i saw you
and i'm so glad i met you

you come to me as a perfect stranger
your beautiful hazel eyes sparkle and captivates me
you've been in my dreams ever since
and i'm so glad i met you [comments] => 6 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mystiquepearl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

memories of our first meeting

Contributed by mystiquepearl on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

you came to me as a perfect stranger
the sun gives you radiance making you shine through the crowd
your beautiful hazel eyes sparkle and captivates me
suddenly my whole world focus just on you

the sun gives you radiance making you shine through the crowd
you walk towards me like my graceful knight of light
suddenly my whole world focus just on you
the truth you do not know is i love you the first time i saw you

you walk toward me like my graceful knight of light
you've been in my dreams ever since
the truth you do not know is i love you the first time i saw you
and i'm so glad i met you

you come to me as a perfect stranger
your beautiful hazel eyes sparkle and captivates me
you've been in my dreams ever since
and i'm so glad i met you

Copyright © mystiquepearl ... [ 2004-03-29 22:21:23]
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Re: memories of our first meeting (User Rating: 1 )
by mystiquepearl on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:24:53 PM AEST
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this is a kind of pantoum poem..where lines from the poem are repeated at set intervals in the stanzas...hope you all like it... please send comments

Re: memories of our first meeting (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:34:15 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..... This was lovely....and the repetition works well....
Jenni

Re: memories of our first meeting (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:51:44 PM AEST
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very pretty!! keep writing, and warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: memories of our first meeting (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:01:14 PM AEST
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a very beautiful and emotional write.
Well done and welcome to ypdc
Larry

Re: memories of our first meeting (User Rating: 1 )
by angrycheerios on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:34:04 PM AEST
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very nice..it makes me feel all warm :)

Re: memories of our first meeting (User Rating: 1 )
by Jupiter on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:49:35 AM AEST
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I really like this. It remindes me of how I meet my girlfriend. Everything written here is similiar on how I meet her. GREAT JOB!! Keep it up! -Steve-

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