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purple on the water.

the stars in the night sky
glow like fire flies.

the crickets' music overwhelms
the croak of the frogs,
yet you can still hear
the gentle whisper of the wind.

the scent of watermelon
fills the air on this
mid summer night. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 27 [informant] => moon_light [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

summer

Contributed by moon_light on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:58:17 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

the sun sets with
purple on the water.

the stars in the night sky
glow like fire flies.

the crickets' music overwhelms
the croak of the frogs,
yet you can still hear
the gentle whisper of the wind.

the scent of watermelon
fills the air on this
mid summer night.

Copyright © moon_light ... [ 2004-03-29 21:58:17]
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Re: summer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:08:40 PM AEST
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Ahhh... I just loved the imagery in this... It left me with such a peaceful feeling....
Thank you for sharing this....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: summer (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:13:42 PM AEST
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very pretty, keep writing! hugs n' love nessa

Re: summer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:30:23 AM AEST
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The scent of watermelon . . . hmn. I can taste it now. Very short, but pleasant portrayal of your summertime.
Thanks for sharing.

Re: summer (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:01:36 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni, this piece leaves one with a very peaceful feeling. Makes me long for summer. Soon real soon.
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Re: summer (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:55:49 AM AEST
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hey jen i like this one its very peacefull thanks for the good read ttyl bye

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Re: summer (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 11:53:38 PM AEST
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PURPLE SKY, YOU PUT PURPLE SKY! I LOVE PURPLE!! LOL. Hey Sis that was a kute soft poem I would love to read everynight watching the sun set go down right with a pretty color purple in the sky. lol. Keep going good at writting. ok love you sis.
Baby_Grl

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