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[sid] => 40869
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Death has become you
[time] => 2004-03-29 20:14:54
[hometext] => I never want you to leave me, my one and only love
[bodytext] => Huddled in a corner,
Rocking back and forth,
Shuddering with sobs,
Your blood staining my skin,
Mixing with my tears,
I temble at the sight of you,
Still body on the ground,
Leaking a red essance,
Eyes closed and asleep,
No breath being drawn,
I turn away from everything,
Never agin will I see,
Take up a dagger,
Gouge out my eyes,
My blindness is comforting,
I crawl to your body,
Cold and damp,
But I don't care,
I kiss your still soft lips,
And lie in your arms,
Hugging you close,
Never to let you go,
Blind as not to see,
Your body still it bleeds,
I cry stinging my eyes,
Burning and red,
My eyes bleed tears,
I gasp in breath,
Quakeing with pain,
Sorrow and torture,
I suddenly scream,
Aggonizing whails,
Yearning to see you,
To know that your alright,
Even though your not,
Crumpled and bleeding,
Red has become me,
The colour from you,
Drying and crusting over,
Recall how this happened,
Everything turned upside down,
The murder of you,
Followed us step by step,
Calling and swearing,
Untill cornering us finnally,
You had told me to run,
They held me back,
Pinned me to a wall,
Circled around you,
Pulling out wepons,
You stare at me in horror,
They dive apon you,
I cannot bear to watch,
Heartfelt screams fill the sky,
Scream and kick,
Calling to you,
They never stop,
Beating and punching,
Hurting me to,
Till the breaking point,
Your body falls to the ground,
Sill echoing a silent scream,
It rings through out my ears,
They decide to leave,
Scared of what they did,
Cold blooded murder,
Now we're here,
Painless and numb,
Together still,
Death has become you.
[comments] => 4
[counter] => 154
[topic] => 39
[informant] => TwEeK
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Grief
)
Death has become you
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:14:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Huddled in a corner,
Rocking back and forth,
Shuddering with sobs,
Your blood staining my skin,
Mixing with my tears,
I temble at the sight of you,
Still body on the ground,
Leaking a red essance,
Eyes closed and asleep,
No breath being drawn,
I turn away from everything,
Never agin will I see,
Take up a dagger,
Gouge out my eyes,
My blindness is comforting,
I crawl to your body,
Cold and damp,
But I don't care,
I kiss your still soft lips,
And lie in your arms,
Hugging you close,
Never to let you go,
Blind as not to see,
Your body still it bleeds,
I cry stinging my eyes,
Burning and red,
My eyes bleed tears,
I gasp in breath,
Quakeing with pain,
Sorrow and torture,
I suddenly scream,
Aggonizing whails,
Yearning to see you,
To know that your alright,
Even though your not,
Crumpled and bleeding,
Red has become me,
The colour from you,
Drying and crusting over,
Recall how this happened,
Everything turned upside down,
The murder of you,
Followed us step by step,
Calling and swearing,
Untill cornering us finnally,
You had told me to run,
They held me back,
Pinned me to a wall,
Circled around you,
Pulling out wepons,
You stare at me in horror,
They dive apon you,
I cannot bear to watch,
Heartfelt screams fill the sky,
Scream and kick,
Calling to you,
They never stop,
Beating and punching,
Hurting me to,
Till the breaking point,
Your body falls to the ground,
Sill echoing a silent scream,
It rings through out my ears,
They decide to leave,
Scared of what they did,
Cold blooded murder,
Now we're here,
Painless and numb,
Together still,
Death has become you.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-03-29 20:14:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Death has become you
(User Rating: 1 ) by LouisaMontagu on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:18:25 PM AEST (User
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oh wow, such power...
I love..!!!
Well Done
Louisa xx |
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Re: Death has become you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:42:50 PM AEST (User
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A masterpiece. This just touched me to my core. One of the most moving writes I have read in awhile. Kie |
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Re: Death has become you
(User Rating: 1 ) by gery_giggles on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:30:43 PM AEST (User
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this was so sad!........you can just feel the pain in the poem.....it brought me to tears. very good write
luv always |
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Re: Death has become you
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:34:19 PM AEST (User
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wow that was moving. great write. |
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