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Array ( [sid] => 40852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Days go by [time] => 2004-03-29 19:05:53 [hometext] => different from my usual style [bodytext] => ~~Days go by.
Ah, here we go again.
days go days go days go by.
What you breathe in is what you breathe out
and I wake up to my blinds closed.
But I can easily open them.
Yeah, I can easily open them.
Put your pretty toes on the rug.
Stretch your arms above your head.
Didn’t you just crack that bone? Oh well, let’s do it again.
Let’s do it all again.
Wake up. Wake up. Over again.
And I say;
Let’s go somewhere fast, yeah.
let’s go somewhere new, please
Just for today. You know I’m good for it.
I know you want to go away.
I can see it when you smile.
Liar. I can see it when you cry
And isn’t this place heaven?
I like this place I’m in.
I tell you so so often.
And I’m not lying a bit.
And I say;
Wake up. Wake up. Look at heaven.
Cover your eyes and you can’t tell.
Cover your mouth and you can’t scream
Cover your ears and you won’t hear.
And I say all is well. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 21 [informant] => PsychoScissors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Days go by

Contributed by PsychoScissors on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:05:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

~~Days go by.
Ah, here we go again.
days go days go days go by.
What you breathe in is what you breathe out
and I wake up to my blinds closed.
But I can easily open them.
Yeah, I can easily open them.
Put your pretty toes on the rug.
Stretch your arms above your head.
Didn’t you just crack that bone? Oh well, let’s do it again.
Let’s do it all again.
Wake up. Wake up. Over again.
And I say;
Let’s go somewhere fast, yeah.
let’s go somewhere new, please
Just for today. You know I’m good for it.
I know you want to go away.
I can see it when you smile.
Liar. I can see it when you cry
And isn’t this place heaven?
I like this place I’m in.
I tell you so so often.
And I’m not lying a bit.
And I say;
Wake up. Wake up. Look at heaven.
Cover your eyes and you can’t tell.
Cover your mouth and you can’t scream
Cover your ears and you won’t hear.
And I say all is well.

Copyright Â© PsychoScissors ... [ 2004-03-29 19:05:53]
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Re: Days go by (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:10:12 PM AEST
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I think this is one o the best one's that you have written, I absolutly adore the beginning and end of it, not to say that anything's wrong with the middle, i've never seen anyone write like this before, i love your style, excelent write!

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