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burn
Contributed by
luckymacie
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:06:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i love you
but i guess you forgot that
i need you
but i guess you dont care
you left me for your ex
someone that will never love you like i do
some **** that will never learn what hurt is
i needed you and you diserted me
i loved you and you didnt care
so when you love someone and they forget you
or when you need someone and they dont care
i hope im here to watch your heart burn
just like you did to mine
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luckymacie
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2004-03-29 18:06:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: burn
(User Rating: 1 ) by neglected1 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:41:35 PM AEST (User
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DANG gurl im guessing this guy really hurt you from reading this one and your "love me or leave me"... (sorry if i got the title wrong) .. but another well done poem.. like i said before i enjoy reading your style .. its just really blunt straight to the point..
well im off to read more from you
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Re: burn
(User Rating: 1 ) by luckycharm on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:51:28 PM AEST (User
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Macie, this is ya friend Pam. I really like this poem.
You expressed your feelings well. Don't forget to read my poetry up here okay.Love, luckycharm. |
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