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You Did
Contributed by
solmyr1404
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:45:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Did I take your breath away
When I kissed you?
You did.
Did I make you feel happy
When I took you in my arms?
You did.
Did I make you heart leap
When I whispered my love in your ear?
You did.
Did I make your head spin
When I kissed you and held you?
You did.
Did I make you break down and cry
With a shattered heart when you left me?
You did.
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Re: You Did
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:53:03 PM AEST
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What a sad poem! Written from the heart! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: You Did
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:21:40 PM AEST
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| this is a really gud poem, made me replay a lot of memories in my mind, good things never seem to last do they...meh. anyways, gud poem :) |
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