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And reminise on memories that didn't happen,
All my thoughts of nothing without the room,
All my hopes and dreams belittled,
By the person who doesn't exist in my head,
In this moment I had no soul,
All my thoughts not extending beyond these walls,
As all these words are to the page,
Heartless Soulless,
For a moment I was able to forget the pain. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 13 [informant] => poison_touch666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Soulless

Contributed by poison_touch666 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:14:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I lay back in my filth,
And reminise on memories that didn't happen,
All my thoughts of nothing without the room,
All my hopes and dreams belittled,
By the person who doesn't exist in my head,
In this moment I had no soul,
All my thoughts not extending beyond these walls,
As all these words are to the page,
Heartless Soulless,
For a moment I was able to forget the pain.

Copyright © poison_touch666 ... [ 2004-03-29 16:14:48]
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Re: Soulless (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:25:34 PM AEST
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Agree weird poem! But I liked it in a twisted way!! Great write!
Anne :D

Re: Soulless (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:32:57 PM AEST
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weird but unique...i enjoyed reading it...
luck to you
~neglected1~

Re: Soulless (User Rating: 1 )
by piggy on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:39:54 PM AEST
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Unfortunately, a lot of us escaped pain by abusing drugs and alcohol, so I can relate!!!

keep 'em coming!

Re: Soulless (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:07:33 PM AEST
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Awsome! i loved it! ;D

Re: Soulless (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:37:14 PM AEST
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i like this even if you may think it is weird and twisted i don't. i guess that makes me weird lol but hey ive been called many things. keep them coming!!

hugs
XgenX

Re: Soulless (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:12:27 PM AEST
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interesting. weird? nah i think its really cool. great write. i enjoyed it.
Arden

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