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Array ( [sid] => 40807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Philosophy of a Grave [time] => 2004-03-29 14:07:37 [hometext] => Rip and torn for ever more, take a look at the end [bodytext] => Carved into self a benevolent rage,
an eternal fire burning within,
a pain that holy water doesn't vanquish
grieving for the death within

Sinking within oneself to a darker plane,
where death roams free from the pain within,
the skies so dark, poisenous vapours,
can barely breathe

The darkness inside me just won't leave,
it has infested my mind,
rotten my soul,
made life a grave,
and made oceans roar with mighty waves

Winds twirl as tornado's are created,
volcano's erupt and the earth is bounded,
a life is born, a city was founded,
dragons flew, people they ate,
now all is heading to a snowy grave [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Philosophy of a Grave

Contributed by kellros on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:07:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Carved into self a benevolent rage,
an eternal fire burning within,
a pain that holy water doesn't vanquish
grieving for the death within

Sinking within oneself to a darker plane,
where death roams free from the pain within,
the skies so dark, poisenous vapours,
can barely breathe

The darkness inside me just won't leave,
it has infested my mind,
rotten my soul,
made life a grave,
and made oceans roar with mighty waves

Winds twirl as tornado's are created,
volcano's erupt and the earth is bounded,
a life is born, a city was founded,
dragons flew, people they ate,
now all is heading to a snowy grave

Copyright © kellros ... [ 2004-03-29 14:07:37]
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Re: Philosophy of a Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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I know those demons. You have portrayed them realistically here.
Stitch

Re: Philosophy of a Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by dead_beauty on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:43:46 PM AEST
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Your darkness is beatiful...this poem is fantastic! Most days, I feel exactly like you described in this piece! Thanks for sharing! :):)~ravenghost

Re: Philosophy of a Grave (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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oh i like this. really dark and awesome. just a really good write. love it.
Arden

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