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scarred beyond conditions
shattered to million pieces
scattered to foreign corners

to quell the bleeding of a heart
the wounds needs to form a scab
a layer of armor to protect
the delicate tender exposed parts

to still the angst of a heart
it is good sense to lease
the stormy winds from up north
quenching the flames of agonies

to ease these hurtful feelings
we turn to science to cryogenics
freezing the heart and body
numbing the pain in theory

to heal a fragile personality
from the experience of defeat
solitude is the only favour
that a hurting heart can seek

to rebuild a house of glass
a heart toppled broken down
we must wait for a long long while
to find all the broken pieces

to relearn the thrills of emotions
a task perhaps insurmountable
how do you teach the lessons of living
to a heart with no reason to live

to conquer the fear of trusting
would need a willing teacher
someone to be there and near
a font of love and patience

to tango perchance to dance
reliving those dreaded tempos
a heart would need to follow
the beats fraught with danger

to reopen a shuttered door
is perhaps impossible to ponder
to let in another stranger
is perhaps too soon thereafter

This tale of a broken heart
the scars that are still fresh
the wounds the would not heal
the pieces that will never fit

perchance the tale of love's slumber
the retreat to solitude's favor
the start of a long long winter
the tale of a heart lost forever. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 43 [informant] => baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds

Contributed by baronhawk on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:21:54 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The tale of a broken heart
scarred beyond conditions
shattered to million pieces
scattered to foreign corners

to quell the bleeding of a heart
the wounds needs to form a scab
a layer of armor to protect
the delicate tender exposed parts

to still the angst of a heart
it is good sense to lease
the stormy winds from up north
quenching the flames of agonies

to ease these hurtful feelings
we turn to science to cryogenics
freezing the heart and body
numbing the pain in theory

to heal a fragile personality
from the experience of defeat
solitude is the only favour
that a hurting heart can seek

to rebuild a house of glass
a heart toppled broken down
we must wait for a long long while
to find all the broken pieces

to relearn the thrills of emotions
a task perhaps insurmountable
how do you teach the lessons of living
to a heart with no reason to live

to conquer the fear of trusting
would need a willing teacher
someone to be there and near
a font of love and patience

to tango perchance to dance
reliving those dreaded tempos
a heart would need to follow
the beats fraught with danger

to reopen a shuttered door
is perhaps impossible to ponder
to let in another stranger
is perhaps too soon thereafter

This tale of a broken heart
the scars that are still fresh
the wounds the would not heal
the pieces that will never fit

perchance the tale of love's slumber
the retreat to solitude's favor
the start of a long long winter
the tale of a heart lost forever.

Copyright © baronhawk ... [ 2004-03-29 13:21:54]
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Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:36:03 PM AEST
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Sad, but intense and descriptive poem!
Good work.
Hur

Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:08:11 PM AEST
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What a teary poem!!!! So sadding!!! I feel like crying!!! You're really talened!!!! Very expressive, transfers lot of emotion!! Awesome write!
Anne :D

Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:20:28 PM AEST
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Wow, I quite like this . . . it was artfully done, beautiful, and made me think. I get the feeling I'm going to be rereading this a few more times . . . skillfully done.

--Nora

Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:05:51 PM AEST
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A very descriptive poem. I've been there and a heart shattering is very painful in its recovery. So vivid this leaves me in awe... Kie

Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:12:52 PM AEST
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Very Sad Yet Very Descriptive
Also Very Emotional
Made Me Wanna Cry..Good Write
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:16:26 PM AEST
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Baron Heart,
I hear your hearts strings stumming with the hurt.
When my wonderful husband died, I was not alert!
I buried my heart where they placed in the ground.
He was my everything, my whole soul 'round.
It was very simple really, I had others that needed me. Little children three......I must go on, and so I grew another heart........and left my heart for him buried with him in the ground!
Yes, it can be done.........I'm a perfect example.
Oh how I related to this beautiful poem......
It was wonderous!
love
consue

Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:35:17 AM AEST
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That was just...beautiful. I'm overwhelmed by the intensity and beauty of this poem.

Re: Of Broken Pieces Scattered By The Winds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:11:05 AM AEST
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great write, my advise is to pick up the pieces because its only in your head that they are scattered, your life will see brighter days..keep going :)

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