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Deep into a sea
Full of fire and errosion thats going way beneath whats me
I watch you cry in agnony and watch you scream in pain
This pastime''s kinda joyful after what you did today
You think that no one matters but in reality they do
You saw my tears of fury, You watched me cry in rage
You listened to my hollow sobs and yet you think that its OK
I guess I never mattered, I guess I never will
I guess you think your perfect and your just too good for me
Now lets see whos laughing as I watch you try to crawl
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Bloody Waterfalls

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:16:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Your blood drips down my waterfall
Deep into a sea
Full of fire and errosion thats going way beneath whats me
I watch you cry in agnony and watch you scream in pain
This pastime''s kinda joyful after what you did today
You think that no one matters but in reality they do
You saw my tears of fury, You watched me cry in rage
You listened to my hollow sobs and yet you think that its OK
I guess I never mattered, I guess I never will
I guess you think your perfect and your just too good for me
Now lets see whos laughing as I watch you try to crawl
Pain becomes indifferent and it can happen to us all

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-03-29 13:16:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:18:38 PM AEST
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You probably were very angry last night! Dark, haunting and terrific!
Hur

Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:22:10 PM AEST
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oh wow. that is very powerful and just awesome. great work! keep it up.
Arden

Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:22:54 PM AEST
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i feel what you say, there's just no pleasing in the person you wrote about, almost like you don't exist. we've all been there... my life is full of it!

Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:57:55 PM AEST
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U must have been really angry at this person... but like as been said before and I echo it now we've all been there... and done that!
I've felt this way myself about ppl... wanted to put them thru the same pain they've put me thru...
There's alot of anger... pain... suffering here... that one feels as hey read... good write... couldn't have written it any better myself... Keep up the good work.
~Donna~

Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:07:13 PM AEST
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As I were reading this poem an evil smile crept to my face couldn't wash it away. It stirred my evil side! Lol!!! What a darkly expressed poem! Awesome write!!!
Anne :D

Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:40:47 AM AEST
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beautiful...i love it. I hate people that think that they deserve everything with out ever giving back. all they do is make you feel like smit. but you know better, its obvious. rise above it, girl.

Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:51:32 PM AEST
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hmmm.....i can taste the sweet revenge on this one.

Re: Bloody Waterfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:11:52 PM AEST
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So full of anger. I can feel the emotions in this write. *S* Cynthia

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