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trying to sort this mess out in my head,
seeing pictures of the way I wish it was,
but never knowing if they are real or fake.
Wondering which path is the best one to choose,
losing my mind amongst all the lies,
wondering if I really have anything to lose,
crying out silently for help with this lie.

Knowing that something is missing,
a hollow space sits in my chest,
wondering where my heart is running to,
trying to keep up, but I'm slowly losing you
losing sight of my heart as it runs to your arms...
...and is dropped on the floor at your feet.

My broken heart fits back in it's space,
fragments of hope painful splinters inside,
wanting to run to you, to talk to you
but also wishing I could hide,
as my broken heart lies bleeding,
killing me from the inside...

so losing you is how it feels to die...
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broken inside

Contributed by lostinmyself on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:21:40 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Lost in my own world,
trying to sort this mess out in my head,
seeing pictures of the way I wish it was,
but never knowing if they are real or fake.
Wondering which path is the best one to choose,
losing my mind amongst all the lies,
wondering if I really have anything to lose,
crying out silently for help with this lie.

Knowing that something is missing,
a hollow space sits in my chest,
wondering where my heart is running to,
trying to keep up, but I'm slowly losing you
losing sight of my heart as it runs to your arms...
...and is dropped on the floor at your feet.

My broken heart fits back in it's space,
fragments of hope painful splinters inside,
wanting to run to you, to talk to you
but also wishing I could hide,
as my broken heart lies bleeding,
killing me from the inside...

so losing you is how it feels to die...

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-03-29 09:21:40]
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Re: broken inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:27:40 AM AEST
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So sad, but very well written.
I hope you will find some comfort and happiness again in your life...
Hur

Re: broken inside (User Rating: 1 )
by MandiMay on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:31:00 AM AEST
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Whoa! thats really good! It's exactly how I feel to.

Re: broken inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:41:17 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel like, I went through this myself a few years ago, still haven't really gotten over it yet. Chin up, this was a great, emotional poem.

Re: broken inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:41:02 AM AEST
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Ouch! That is exactly how it feels. Time does heal you though. That wound does seal itself and eventually the space fills with other things. I know this doesn't sound like the truth right now, but it is. I'll pray for you.
Stitch

Re: broken inside (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:28:45 AM AEST
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Well done, i love the last line, just adds that extra kick of sorrow. I somewhat agree it is very painful and you described it well

Silent

btw-thanks for your comment

Re: broken inside (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:39:22 PM AEST
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wow. so intense, yet truthful. i hope you are happier soon.

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