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Array ( [sid] => 40763 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Observer [time] => 2004-03-29 06:38:58 [hometext] => I observe our world [bodytext] => From a distance
Drifting clouds
Scrape ever changing green
And black and white wipes

From afar
Hunting sun beams
Catch the buzzing crowd
Under many-colored sun-shades

In the distance
Flagellating waves
Infest the shores
With the moribund cachalot's lament

So far way
Persisting desert winds
Invade our ears
With dying children's sandy tears

In my ivory tower
I behold the world yonder
Through the World Wide Web
But I keep the windows shut [comments] => 11 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 55 [ratings] => 11 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Observer

Contributed by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:38:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

From a distance
Drifting clouds
Scrape ever changing green
And black and white wipes

From afar
Hunting sun beams
Catch the buzzing crowd
Under many-colored sun-shades

In the distance
Flagellating waves
Infest the shores
With the moribund cachalot's lament

So far way
Persisting desert winds
Invade our ears
With dying children's sandy tears

In my ivory tower
I behold the world yonder
Through the World Wide Web
But I keep the windows shut

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-03-29 06:38:58]
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Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:56:23 AM AEST
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soo well done..venkat

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:06:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful Just Absolutely Marvelous
Great Write....Loved It....Keep Em Coming
And Thanks For Your Comments On My
Work As Well....
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:06:46 AM AEST
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Wonderfully expressed with such an array of images, well done. very well done

Silent

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:13:39 AM AEST
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Well-written and an interesting subject. I like :)

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:23:29 PM AEST
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very vivid... nice :)

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:37:55 PM AEST
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Awesome poem!!!! Really astonishing!!!
Anne :D

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:56:21 PM AEST
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just awesome. i really like how you wrote this. just beautiful to read. loved it.
Arden

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:08:06 PM AEST
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Hmn. Hunting sunbeams? I approximated that idea in my head on friday night, but forgot about it, along a dreamy commute. Perhaps for a reason, because I doubt I would have come up with as good a poem as this at the time. Nicely appropriated.
Well done.

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:49:37 PM AEST
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Ahh the fabled observer of things.... you could have been writing of me it seem... an advice to this protagonist..this observer...go out once a whiles... stewing does not do the prune good... let it bake in the sun... I know from experience that being an observer is great but you lose out on participation in things...anyway that's my take... nice expressive write. I connected to it for I am an onserve per se.

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by SugimotoYouki on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:10:06 AM AEST
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well done..
you created nice imaginare pictures...

Re: The Observer (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:40:50 AM AEST
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This is a very nice creative write. Well done Hur. *S* Cynthia

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