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My heart is filling with disgust
My touch is not so gentle
Cause its taken over us

My lips not perfect rubies
My eyes not perfect jems
But yet you keep on sitting and staring upon them

My outer beauty's poisen
My inner is a sin

My thoughts are going crazy
Perhaps, thats why you've not got in

I could kill you if I wanted
Because you are my prey
but thats too easy dont you see
I think Ill keep you one more day

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Poisenous Beauty

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:44:42 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

My veins run cold with anger
My heart is filling with disgust
My touch is not so gentle
Cause its taken over us

My lips not perfect rubies
My eyes not perfect jems
But yet you keep on sitting and staring upon them

My outer beauty's poisen
My inner is a sin

My thoughts are going crazy
Perhaps, thats why you've not got in

I could kill you if I wanted
Because you are my prey
but thats too easy dont you see
I think Ill keep you one more day

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-03-29 02:44:42]
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Re: Poisenous Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:32:32 AM AEST
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I DON'T THINK I'D SAY BITE ME,BECAUSE IF YOU DID I'D BE DEAD! COOL & SAFISTICATED POEM!! A DARK BUT REDEEMING POEM!!! GREAT WORK!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!

Re: Poisenous Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:46:02 AM AEST
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good write

Re: Poisenous Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:50:27 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
very deep write!
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Poisenous Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:27:22 AM AEST
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Really dark and deliciously wicked!
Great work!
Hur

Re: Poisenous Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:44:53 AM AEST
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i know the feeling....very well. i dont want to sound conceded but i know that my physical appearence isnt all that bad and a lot of people, more should i say guys trying to get laid, like me only because of that. its like luring them into something they have no clue. no clue that im a lot more or less than that.

Re: Poisenous Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:56:41 PM AEST
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ohh very dark and creepy. i loved this. well written. awesome write by a great writer.
Arden

Re: Poisenous Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:10:36 AM AEST
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I echo Arden. She took the words write (for the sake of a pun) out of my mouth.
Rather dark, yet... yet... I can't grasp it. I liked a lot. Keep writing.
Take care.
David

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