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Array ( [sid] => 4074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Home [time] => 2002-09-20 20:40:12 [hometext] => Again, another poem with a category not listed. Probably more like Sick Love. Isn't it Ironic? P.S I left him years ago. [bodytext] => I'd get violent, if I were physical
I'll probably cry instead, I'm sentimental
I will not do it in front of you,
What good would that do?
I don't think I should have taken this ride
Exactly what do you have to hide?

Go Home with her, no I would never
Sleep with that chick? No not ever

it was after midnight when you got in

Do we have to go through that again
I am willing to bet you would understand

What? a stinging slap from a loving hand

No, I would not do that, don't hide your face

Oh guess it's too crowded in this place
So give me a hint, where did the money go

Why ask me, you're the one who would know
Just what is it you think I've done

I bet you used it to go have fun

stop flinching away from me
That's why I do it can't you see?
It's only done out of my love for you
I'm not the monster you make me into
I love you so much it makes me crazy
I can't see straight my visions hazy
I've never felt this way before
I could never love someone more
What can I do to help you know
It only happens because I love you so
Than you ask me about crazy things you hear
and start to look at me with fear
I become afraid of loosing you
I'm not sure just what to do

so the answer is to kill me with your love
shower me with punches and shoves

well if you would just shut your mouth
you would know what everything was about

If i don't shut it you figure you should do it for me
would you just like me to start calling you daddy
I am just supposed to listen to what you say
and ask no questions come what may

Just be quiet what is your deal

let go that hurts real

Oh cry about it you ***** baby
I told you, it's your fault you make me

Ok, whatever look I'm sorry can you just drive
I want to make it home alive

Oh yeah, now you just want me to stop

Look can't we just let this drop
I believe you is that okay
I know you worked from morning till midnight yesterday
I am sure the money was spent on food and gas that's dandy
I'm sure rent didn't go to your ***** nose candy
I don't know why she keeps calling and hanging up on me
So what ever we'll just let this be

I told you your the one to blame
You play one sick and twisted game
you just keep nagging me and saying I cheat on you
So how many people do you do on the side one, two?
why do you have problems trusting me
what are you hiding from me

Please let go of my hair
this isn't fair
why does it always end this way
what is it you want me to say
I said I was sorry, can you please just drive
I want to make it home alive...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 21 [informant] => spaded [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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Contributed by spaded on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 08:40:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I'd get violent, if I were physical
I'll probably cry instead, I'm sentimental
I will not do it in front of you,
What good would that do?
I don't think I should have taken this ride
Exactly what do you have to hide?

Go Home with her, no I would never
Sleep with that chick? No not ever

it was after midnight when you got in

Do we have to go through that again
I am willing to bet you would understand

What? a stinging slap from a loving hand

No, I would not do that, don't hide your face

Oh guess it's too crowded in this place
So give me a hint, where did the money go

Why ask me, you're the one who would know
Just what is it you think I've done

I bet you used it to go have fun

stop flinching away from me
That's why I do it can't you see?
It's only done out of my love for you
I'm not the monster you make me into
I love you so much it makes me crazy
I can't see straight my visions hazy
I've never felt this way before
I could never love someone more
What can I do to help you know
It only happens because I love you so
Than you ask me about crazy things you hear
and start to look at me with fear
I become afraid of loosing you
I'm not sure just what to do

so the answer is to kill me with your love
shower me with punches and shoves

well if you would just shut your mouth
you would know what everything was about

If i don't shut it you figure you should do it for me
would you just like me to start calling you daddy
I am just supposed to listen to what you say
and ask no questions come what may

Just be quiet what is your deal

let go that hurts real

Oh cry about it you ***** baby
I told you, it's your fault you make me

Ok, whatever look I'm sorry can you just drive
I want to make it home alive

Oh yeah, now you just want me to stop

Look can't we just let this drop
I believe you is that okay
I know you worked from morning till midnight yesterday
I am sure the money was spent on food and gas that's dandy
I'm sure rent didn't go to your ***** nose candy
I don't know why she keeps calling and hanging up on me
So what ever we'll just let this be

I told you your the one to blame
You play one sick and twisted game
you just keep nagging me and saying I cheat on you
So how many people do you do on the side one, two?
why do you have problems trusting me
what are you hiding from me

Please let go of my hair
this isn't fair
why does it always end this way
what is it you want me to say
I said I was sorry, can you please just drive
I want to make it home alive...




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Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 09:27:40 PM AEST
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A very powerful piece...it gripped me from start to finish. Well written and moving..
Chrissie


Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Bubbles420 on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 09:21:00 AM AEST
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This was a very well written write.




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